Hi, I'm Chloe. I'm not much of a writer, but I want to be! That's why I'm here, so people can critique my work and help me improve for the next story.
The CMC are grown mares, all having their cutie marks.
Apple Bloom, an Apple Being Painted.
Sweetie Belle, a bell with a musical note,
Babs Seed, a seed beginning to bloom,
But Scootaloo, nothing. She can't fly, and still hasn't got her cutie mark, yet she still seeks to find her destiny.
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Just another short fic! Sorry, again. I'm not good at writing long stories. I hope this is to your liking, though. I tried really hard.
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kinda short, but still a nice story
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Yeah, I'm not good at writing long stories. I prefer short and sweet ones, but thank you either way!
This was a nice and sweet little story. Keep up the writing!
It's called "coat" I believe. Also, this story was real short and super fast paced, I like the idea but it's just not the best I've seen. I look forward to seeing more stories from you, that are longer! ;)
Also, between every paragraph, you should press "Enter" twice. Instead of once.
2337902 I only press once, and I believe it doesn't matter much. But you should use indents if you're not using paragraph spaces.
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Thank you very much!
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Yeah. But on her coat, is fur!
I'm not good at writing long stories. If i do, they tend to be...
Really.
Really.
Bad.
Like my previous stories.
But thank you,
2337902
Ah, yes, Okay.
This is very cute! great job! I love the cover art as well
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Thank you very much! That means a lot!