Private Crawford is Lost, after a failed military expiriment catpults him into an unknown land he finds his life has changed forever, will he find his way home? Will he Stay in this strange place?
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This story has a lot of promise. HOWEVER, you need to punctuate your sentences more, so that readers know when one thought ends and another begins.
I'll be whatching.
Thanks for the feed back, I am trying my best with punctuation.
I'll just leave this here
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Making a few alterations, I really am sorry for what happened but it had to be done.
NOW TO BRIGHTEN YOUR SPIRITS!
Lets go meet Applejack!
Applejack and most of her family are dead!
i.imgur.com/qwbwZ7g.jpg
War isn't pleasent, now would you have prefered somone like RD or Fluttershy getting killed? NO!
Look AJ won't go unavenged, when Michael gets to the queen she'll wish she had never been born.
all changelings must die. -_-
of course, I'm nothing if not thorough
so he went to Vietnam? and he's a private?
Day 4 Part 2, Mike gets a minigun
Yes he went to vietnam got promoted to corporal then kinda fell asleep on guard duty back stateside and got demoted to Private.
And no miniguns, Flamethrower more likely
it's
"Fuck my life," Michael muttered
or
"Fuck my life," muttered Micheal
or
Micheal muttered, "Fuck my life."
for more info go to
http://fanfic.theforce.net/articles.asp?action=view&ID=38
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Do I look Like a Care?
what makes you think I'm basing this off of TF2 weapons?
I meant the M2 Flamethrower used in Vietnam
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Umm... Zecora, not Zecura. Unless her twin sister's visiting or something. :P
Allow me to reiterate
*clears throat*
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Thanks for the feed back But I have not the time nor do I have the patients to go back and change every little mistake.
In short I don't care
applejack...dead oh hell naw.
lets napalm the changlings
I wasn't expecting some sort of spanish inquisition
Avenger001, the fuck you been? We knew she was dead days ago.
hehehe napalm
I love the smell of napalm in the morning, smells like.....victory.
screw napalm, lets nuke them.
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Sorry to say this but I am afraid the Story may be coming to an End, My grandmother had a terrible fall and I have less time to devote to this. Please understand I'll get a Sequel up as soon as possible. Thank you for all your support, criticism and Praise
I dont know a device that can make soldier go bye bye....
I'm sorry to point this out....how does he know north is not north anymore? You should look up how a compass works.
did everypony take a zantac?
btw I do like it
that was...sudden. Now lets doble check. dinner. go visit applejack.....applejack dead.....yep that was pretty sudden.
2264756
Of course not because it was covered up by the government.
♠♦♣♥
*Spoiler Alert*
Michael's son uses it to find his father in the sequel
2264758
For your information I do know how a compass works, He is going by the markings not the needle.
2265546 ok look you use the needle to find north than you line up the markings with the needle. So there is no way he would know north was diffrent ( have him have gps instead or something)
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-_-
you didn't read the prolague did you
I smell a sequel
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I may have something up my sleeve, but first I have to attend to some personal matters....
This leaves me with strong bitter sweet taste, for the the lost humanity, for one i would've perfered to die then to become a pony or another animal. I'm sorry i may love ponies but not to the extent of becoming one, still great story.
If anyone is interested in helping me with another story similar to this please message me
2264756
Is called a nuke
Daaw
2338592 Yes but that is pretty messy and leaves radiation behind
2238032 my heart
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2248994
Next time put a >>
for poor old 2248846
andremember that worst pon3 dead would be annouce in a 3 days delay
BY LAW
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One does not simply puts a shit load of dots in the end of a story with out making a sequel
I tried a sequel but I felt it didn't do this story justice. Sorry, but if you give me an idea as to what kind of story would be prefered in a sequel I would be happy to give it another go.
2248994 I know she was dead but I put the comment on this one because battle cry is more likely to see it here.
the changelings failed at one thing, they pissed off a human hell pissing off a human can be worse than Celestia, Celestia would imprison the changeling a human will make changeling's extinct