This story is a sequel to Patricidium
Sometimes it's just too hard to let go...
... When angels call.
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The Ranger
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Oh the pain... this Sunday we have presidential elections this may very well mean our freedom or doom... angles would be a nice thing for a change...
other than that you have great delivery, I am already into the story can't wait to read some more
2411294 Glad someone likes it. I'm almost done with the second chapter at the moment, will probably be up in a few days.
And here I am again, great job it goes perfectly with my melancholy, finally is starting to rain here again, to many that would be a bad thing but I don't really like the sun that much so I welcome some clouds... bad things have being taking place in my country and my house so I am becoming even more of a... I don't know the word but someone who has no feelings of any kind, like I don't care about anything, but here... today I read this chap... and somehow I think it made me sad or something except that is was like a good feeling i liked it, I can't really explain why I liked it so much... but it is 12:23 (noon) and I finally have some interested on getting thru my work day... perhaps I read the next chap now or wait till tomorrow so I could make tomorrow a better day... anyways I am still on my free lunch period so I may just take a pic of what is next.
PS: I haven't being here in a long time, but I read some of your blogs and stuff... anyways thanks for your writing it made my horrible day bearable.
ok I did read this during my lunch time anyways... it says that it is completed... I mean for real there has to be some more... this can't be it... also I did like it a lot thanks.
sorry I miss read it is implemented never mind my last comment
2481298 I'd say a word for that might be either apathy or just being numb to the pain around you. It happens, the mind chooses to sort of shut down to protect you from the outside world. Then again, reading about someone - or in this case, somepony's - sorrow might just make you see the good things around you, even though you might not even realize it.
And no, this story is far from over. My guess is that it will be around the same lenght as that of Patricidium. But unfortunately, my own interest in it is slowly starting to fade. I mean, no one else except you seem to give a single shit about it.. And that's just dissapointing.
Ok here we are again yo see this is a short chap, but it is quiet great, I mean the thing that I said about your other story I like the way this chap ends right here... I love this story can't wait for the next chap
Wow..... just..... wow......
4310973 I take it you like this story, lol
Just finished Patricidium and saw this Must read!
This is great don't get down
Nameless more please!
7792226 Maybe one day I'll finish it.
Well! This certainly had me interested, the entire time! I like!
Only thing I'd recommend is something about this beginning here. (Why I didn't comment on the last chapter)
The part with shadows and fire.. felt a slight bit too dragged out.. and even a bit too figurative. Like, for a while there, I literally thought there was a fire. Which is good, because you got the feeling across. But... it was too much of a feeling.
Perhaps consider speeding that part up a bit, but otherwise.. this made me feel happy.
Nice work!
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I'm glad you liked it, and thank you so much for the advice!
Just to be clear, you should probably read the story this is a sequel to; Patricidium. Coulnd't put it in the group since it's rated Mature. It's a dark, gruesome story about the same pony here, Lightning. This story is more drama and sorrow, while Patricidium is mostly a horror story.
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Ah I see. Yes, I'll go read that one. Sounds interesting!