• Member Since 3rd Mar, 2013
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Ziggitty


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Well that was terrible. Your hurt best pony AND this was a below average fic. thumbs down

xDan #3 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · 3 ·

Unoriginal, poorly executed pointless fiction written by some edgy teenager. I'm guessing this was intentionally bad, but after seeing the front page today, I thought not.
In short,
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Just pm me an I'll be happy to give a reivew bro. But No.....Just no. I don't want another Sweet Apple massacre

Comment posted by Templar Pony deleted Mar 3rd, 2013
xTSGx #7 · Mar 3rd, 2013 · · 3 ·

*Trollfic detected*
*Activating DNFTT Protocol*
*Initiating downvote*

2205959 DNFTT Protocol failure: Reaction shown to any degree

REALLY bad fic. :facehoof:

I WOULD DELEAT THIS CAP IF I WERE U:flutterrage:

CRAP sorry

Why are people down voting. Its a Dark story, of course it going to to be like this. If you don't like this, don't read it.

Well, the ending gave my a suprise. Ill agree with the guy below me. if you dont like this sort of thing dont downvote, just leave. Downvote's should be for constructive criticism.

Ill upvote you bro (even though the ending wasnt my cup of tea and you hurt best pony)
Pay NO attention to ANY downvotes, they are people that dont like this sort of thing.

Downvotes don't bother me. I fully realize lots of people will downvote this based on the content. I tagged it properly. Not really sure what they expected.

They probably shouldn't come back, as this is EASILY the mildest chapter. :fluttershysad:

That story pic just makes it all worse.

>> TheGuyWhoCumsOnPonies don't you also write rape clopfics?
I've read both.

Reading these rape fics really makes me want to slowly and painfully slit the shafts of the rapest.

2235504 downvoting because it is just not very well written.

Are u a fluttershy hater.This is insulting to the fandom.Having people like you writing fics like this shows people how sick you are.This is a kid's show for crying out loud.I can't believe there is such a group like this.I couldn't bear to even read your story.I hope you one day realize how twisted and cruel this story is.:applecry::twilightangry2::fluttercry::flutterrage:

Poorly written, rape, and hatred toward Fluttershy...? -Infinity out of 10

2235504
Lmao you don’t have a Non-con tag on it buddy, you did not tag it properly. There are many positively received rape fics on this site, I have a meh one myself. Your writing is just not entertaining and it seems like your goal was mostly just to shock, or there was just no thought that went into the story.

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