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InsaneJustin


Was a fan of the music, Got into the show, Now im loving alot of the fan fics.

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I was way more than slightly intoxicated when I submitted this, I ended up passing out on the floor of my room shortly after submitting it. :twilightblush: Hopefully its fixed up enough, he-he-he:scootangel:

Dude, this story. Is the Best. POSSible. THING!:raritystarry:

Comment posted by InsaneJustin deleted Jul 3rd, 2013

all I can say is please do not stop!:fluttercry:

I am loving this story so far:pinkiecrazy:

Keep up the awesome work!:rainbowdetermined2:

I love this story SO MUCH!!
Please don't stop, PLEASE!!!

Well shiz, I got drunk, and in my blacked out state, wrote something I never intended to happen, but when I woke up in the morning and began to edit the chapter during my hangover, I liked it, now I need to make it...Not sound so cheesy. its taking me a bit of time to make it work.... Next chapter should be out in a few days. almost done with it. :pinkiecrazy:

Ok, now I'm pissed at those fuckers.

Guuurururghghghg *Gurgle gurgle* So many feels!

Merry got drunk, along with the kitchen staff.... THIS CAN ONLY END WELL!

I like this, think you could make the next evil power something like consumption from the Prototype games? Where he can absorb people and their memories, as well as shape-shift? C'mon, pleeaaseeee?

Alright, I really hope you make him look more human, keep the sharp teeth, but he shouldn't look like a diamond dog, seriously.

I really hope you make Merry get his memories back, it's just so damn stupid the way he is now. I understand that the social isolation has made him forget, but something should jog his memories loose, without the ponies helping. That way we can have a part where he laments the deaths of all the griffons, and what not. Although I suppose this is all your choice, and it may well have already happened considering there are many chapters ahead of this one that I have yet to read, so, ya'know. Anyway, fantastic story, even if his name is Merry Sue, he sure isn't one.

3744999 Glad you enjoy it so far. when i thought of the absorption powers I wasn't even thinking of Prototype, I was thinking more like Steven Kings The Green Mile type of thing. and I guess maybe I wasn't very good with the description, when he absorbed the strength from the Diamond dog, but he was only supposed to gain muscle, the teeth and size. He still looked human for the most part. it's been awhile since I last read this:twistnerd:

Captain: "TAKE THE SHIP UP TO LUDICROUS SPEED!"
Crew: "Sir, Ludicrous speed?"
Captain: "YOU HEARD ME!"

Anyway, still a fantastic story, don't see how Soul can die, her being a demon and all, but still, good chapter.

This story better keep going damn it! It's too good to let it fall into the ether, it needs to keep going!

Not sure on how I feel about this story. To be honest the biggest issue for me was the ending, but I'm not the writer, merely along for the ride.

Talking to yourself is fine, it is when they start telling you what to do that you should be worried.

"What a waste it is to lose one's mind. Or not to have a mind."
- Dan Quail, speaking to the United Negro College Fund

You know, I just realized that before he went full bonkers, he could have used his absorbing boon to absorb some extra size to his ding-dong. Being able to get jiggy with Flutterbutter probably would have helped to mitigate his kookoo spiral.

I'm going to guess the parts with words in them were done drunk. . . :derpyderp1:

:facehoof: YOLO . . . Really?
You should know that it is really 'YORETTATN' (You Only Reincarnate Enough Times To Ascend To Nirvana)

‘ Fucking god’s can teleport, but they can’t save

These bitches are not gods!

The first one was good, but the ending and this story are really ehhh.

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