Rainbow Dash gets accepted to the Wonderbolts as a 1st runner up in case somepony in the lead show gets injured or whatever. But shes in! To Celebrate, her and the girls Enjoy large amounts of Cider. Some things happen, and now shes having twins and Big Mac is the father.
Problems arise after they are born however, as not everything is sunshine and smiles.
NOTE: This is the 3rd arc, and it goes on a completely different path. Clink the link below to the story before this if you want some things explained, otherwise, just enjoy it. If you like to play guessing games, be my guest and continue reading.
The Rage of a Damaged Father
P.P.S. I'll add a pic when I find something suitable. Couldn't find one, so I made a crappy one. :p
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I really enjoyed reading this, and I'm looking forwards the second part
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Glad You enjoyed it, I had a lot of fun writing it out
It was worth the wait, this is now officially my favorite of all fanfics. Keep up the good work!
Disturbed is a great band my friend,
but don't abuse the power or I will kill you
. . . .Naw just kidding good chapter
3494818 One of the best I'd say.
First words out of Merry's mouth 'DAMN YOU UMBRAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!', sorry, I got the idea and didn't want to lose it, also, I really hope Merry keeps his memories to an extent. I also sense that a large amount of hair dye will be used.
Since there were no real Prototype things last story, I feel they need to happen now. I'm totally not pushing something that has nothing to do with the story, totally not doing that, you're crazy. Anyway, he should get some of the Halo books, ya'know dimensional portals and all, no idea what could fall through.
3752728 Yeah I had some ideas in place, Just not sure how to fill the gaps between the ideas so the story flows... I'll figure it out
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So when the new one
I really like that you added in classical alchemical technique descriptions.
I would really like to know how the story ended, though.