It's just an average day at Teufort, when suddenly an unexplainable phenomenon occurs! Legends tell of the nine warriors, who will one day approach Equestria and save it from the powers of evil.
Well, that was depressing and a tad bit creepy. Like something I'd expect to find in a horror game. Very well written, though; the emotions and turmoil are very evident. And that ending... bordering on creepypasta stuff right there.
6300551 Thanks for your comments! As for the first, I was revising another story and then it turned into a much darker separate story. This one is not my best writing as I was simply trying to think of a story to go with the wonderful picture at the top.
6304653 Well, for something you just threw together, it's exceptionally well done. It does leave a lot of questions, but I think that kind of adds to the eeriness of it. So, looking forward to more when they come around.
Well, that was depressing and a tad bit creepy. Like something I'd expect to find in a horror game. Very well written, though; the emotions and turmoil are very evident. And that ending... bordering on creepypasta stuff right there.
Welp, on to the next one.
From dark and moody to sticky sweet. Mah feels, they don't know what they're doin'.
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Thanks for your comments! As for the first, I was revising another story and then it turned into a much darker separate story. This one is not my best writing as I was simply trying to think of a story to go with the wonderful picture at the top.
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Well, for something you just threw together, it's exceptionally well done. It does leave a lot of questions, but I think that kind of adds to the eeriness of it. So, looking forward to more when they come around.
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I'm actually trying to see if there's any other old writing files on my computer to revise, since that first turned out great.