1,000 years ago, two sister created Equestria. The Princess of the Sun, Celestia, and the Princess of the Moon, Luna, co-ruled Equestria until Princess Luna went mad with jealousy and tried to take over. But what if there is a page missing from the history books? What if there was a third alicorn who helped shape what Equestria is today? What if the mentioned alicorn came back to make his presence known? Will anyone beable to stop him during his unexpected return?
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Did you even run a spell-check on this or proof it at all before posting?
2334126 Did you dislike this because of my mistakes?
2334422 That and because it's a generic plot that's been done countless times and it brings nothing new to the table.
2334656 I'm sorry that you do not enjoy the story, I am not the best writer and I'm not claiming to be. If other people have posted stories like this I didn't know, I don't read fan fictions all day, I thought I had an original idea and I'm trying to run with it. I like your profile pic by the way.
2334815 Thank you.
Also, here is a link to a group where you can get a proof/prereader to whip this into better shape.
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i'm be honest.. i like this guy. i'd help him take over the world.
If you know what I mean
2461724 I know what you mean
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