Four months ago Princess Twilight decided to try out a new spell she made. The result was a broken Equestria filled with: strange creatures, harsh terrain, and deranged stallions looking for a mare. That is where the story enters, on a young mare who is trying to survive in this new Equestria.
Looks good so far, though a couple of things stood out for me...
Maybe italicize when the main character is thinking to herself, instead of quotes? Quotations make it seem as if she is speaking aloud. There are quite a few typos as well, but a quick spell check should do the trick!
Hopefully there will be more to this story! Well done over all.
2236889 Thank you very much, there is more to come really soon, I'm typing as we... You know type.