Many evils have risen and fell across this world, some wanted to conquer, others to simply expand their own lands and some just want to do whatever they want. I have no such ambitions but something else... Let’s hope the present world is ready for me
You have lived for thousands of years and have not aged a day, then for no reason you were sent to a world with colorful talking magical annoying ponies. Now then how about when you first get there god attacks you and loses sounds great right? Nope
Looks good, interesting premise, but far too short to get into. Very nice
I know I'm not one to talk; but unless you are writing a comedy, you should avoid using the word "cliché" in stories, as it tends to break immersion.
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I'm taking your word for it, replaced cliché with chilling. It does seem a bit more fitting, thanks for the feedback.