Minimal is good, I mean the japanese words are kinda crucial for Ichigo's dialouge and ethnicity.

all thats missing...Kamen Rider...Decade...

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That is true, sad thing is I can't seem to find a reliable translator for some words besides my favorite sub text group, TV Nihon -it's where I get all of my sub TV shows when it comes to Tokusatsu and a few anime/music videos.

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Tsukasa-sempai may or may not be appearing in the story unless I can or figure out a reliable way to get hi to Equestria besides a massive Dopant attack that Ichigo can't handle on he own. Of course she will not be the only human in Equestria in a few chapters.

A female descendent of a certain masked rapier wielding Spanish Fox with her own set of Gaia Memories will appear with a gift for Ichigo.

i don't care how much Japanese you use...

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I kinda do, mostly because I don't want to push or scare away potential readers with the Japanese, even if I do translate it either in the story or in the author's comments.

BTW in the Kamen Rider W series, some dopants had the ability to grew into giants -not Super Sentai/Power Rangers 'make my monster grow' tall but close enough- and I need to figure out how to have Eternal fight at their level. I was thinking a Gundam or something similar but I'm not sure. What do you guys think?

2579447 well, i wouldnt use a GUNDAM myself, it kind of breaks the whole Kamen Rider thing...but a blending of Senai could work, Decade made an appearance in Samurai Sentai Shinkenger, and the Shinkengers appeared in Decade...though perhaps...something in a more Mahou Sentat Magiranger would be more appropriate for Equestria, another of Kami-sammas little gifts, a Titan Forme. oh, and i did some homework, although the honourific -sama shows great respect...it is -dono that is used for a lord (see Samurai Sentai Shinkenger for an example..)

Well I kind of meant Gundam like -mainly because that is my favorite show. My idea was have it modeled after a gundam -like 00 or Strike- but have it a fusion of magic and technology. The idea came to me when I was reading Andrew Joshua Talon's Hands where his version of Equestria sometimes have object from the nearby human world get transported into Equestria. -little sneak peek of what I'm planning -

Anyways, My idea was for Ichigo to find the remains of a Gundam -haven't decided which one, maybe 00- and with the help of a secret part of Canterlot's government rebuild it to work not only on magic but also on the power from the Gaia Memories.

2597632 well, that could still work for the Titan form. the Magiranger used a spell to become their mecha, but say that Eternal finds a GUNDAM, a) where is she going to keep it, b) how will she maintain or resupply it and c) how can she mount up quickly if needed? the Titan system is far faster and easier to control, plus u could work in the Maximum attacks easily

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I think i'll leave my answer as to how Ichigo would restock/repair the Gundam for the next chapter...

Thought now that I think about it, their may be a way to combine the Titan form with a Gundam... Ever heard of Star Driver:Kagayaki no Takuto???

2621757 sadly...i have not...

so, will u be getting back to this story anytime soon?

I will, just having some trouble working out a few kinks to the next chapter.

Well that is awesome. Hey can you make spike accel? The guy has the heart to be that kamen rider and he really needs something to help his friends. Also I got an oc rider you can use. He is kamen rider wild. His Gaia memories are based on animals. Actually elements and animals. His default form is heat-wolf. His driver is a modified double-driver that is silver with the slots looking like claws. He has fourth generation memories or t3 Gaia memories. His armor is crimson and has a wolf theme. His finisher is called blazing howl. He has the tiger, fox, and hawk memories plus the cyclone,metal, and twilight memories. Like double he has the now count your sins phrase but it is instead now count up your dark sins. His fighting style depends on the memory.

The story is good so far. My only gripe is that Eternal is my less favoret Kamen Rider

It's shinagami party time!

Minimal works because it's Kamen Rider. Stuff like Henshin, and catch phrases should be good enough. Just have the curses and what not that would be in Japanese in italics like this chapter. Also, on the discussion of huge monster fights, why not use a broken down G Gundam? The only reason I recommend that is so you can get away with cheesy lines (like "Take this! My love, my anger, and all of my rage! SHINING FINGER SWORD!!" That is an actual line in the dub.). There are few shows with such glorious cheesiness, but if you don't use it, then I am fine with that.

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They should have done better with the attack name.

SHINING SABRE!

Will the story ever be updated again I find it very interesting