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I see great things in this stories future. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Thanks for the comments everyone. I hope all of you will stick around to keep on reading my story.

BTW, sorry for borrowing your first chapter idea Swift Blaze but it was too good not to use. Thought I did try to expand on it a little bit ore then you did.

Also are they any Kamen Rider Fan out there that wouldn't mind editing this for me. I'm great when it comes to the meat of the story but the fine points always seem to bypass me sometimes.

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I don't mind at all. That type of scenario of entering Equestria was too good to pass up on when I first started to write mine. I will chat with you later on something else though. If you are interested. :duck::rainbowdetermined2:

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KUUGAAAA!!!! :rainbowdetermined2: :raritystarry: :pinkiehappy: :yay:

Awesome picture man! glad you want to stick around to read more. will hopefully have the next chapter out soon but with collage it may take a bit longer. :fluttershyouch: :raritydespair: :applecry:

because fuck you! thats why! and she threw a flash bang...

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Sorry man.:fluttercry: Still trying to get out of my habits I picks up from Fanfiction.net.
The one thing I love about this site is you can easily modify a chapter if you don't like it, talk with the readers without having to use private messaging, and even add music/pictures to the chapters.

The one things I really hated about FF.net was that you could not just tell a writer you liked their story without logging in. Here if you can't log in you can give a thumbs up to a story you like no matter what! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Great story great characters a great battle scene and ninja clans to boot 20% more awsome than a lot of storys

Hmmm, yet another good story start!

I apply what I said in my review of your Wizard story to this.

Though I have to say, the use of Shinobi in this certainly makes things interesting in a different flavor!

Best of luck, I'll be awaiting new content eagerly!

AY YI YI! Story good so far but GDAMN please update soon! The suspense is killing me with whats gonna happen in this story! :pinkiesad2:

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Thank you both for the comments :pinkiehappy: and yes that is what I was going for Isumo when I came up with this fic. Thought the idea only solidified when I saw a Smithsonian Channel special called Ninja: Shadow Warrior which told some real facts about the ninja as well as the story of one famous ninja lord called Tanba or the Iga region. :twilightsmile: That's where I got the name for the second main OC.

I'm also thinking of using one of the oldest bag guys of the My Little Pony G1 -I think- but with a Dr Kyoto Maki twist in a sense. what do you guys think?

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...please tell me you mean the FIRST villain in MLP Gen 1...from the movie...the one with a particular pouch around his neck!?!? Seriously, I've mused and modeled ideas about that guy so often, the ultimate horror that in Gen 4 is the unspoken ruler of Tararus...and the true evil who's artifact can and will defeat the Elements head-on at full power, because that counterpart to it's power was lost long ago, and the Elements are but a phantom imitation of that power.

...sorry, major fan-boy moment. That said, Maki is one of the all time favorite Kamen Rider villains, OOOs was an awesome series hands down! Now this?

This has my complete attention.

I eagerly await what else you have...though I feel I have to ask one question.

Have you considered other rider forms with the T-2 memories besides Eternal and Joker? I've always felt each of the main memories from Double could easily create their own form. Mind you, most of them outside of the 6+Fang would be unstable, and Accel memory wouldn't be able to use it's full abilities in the Lost Driver...but still, it's always been a thought in my head.

...Also...as an aside...what I fsomeone used one memor to henshin, but another for the Maximum Drive?

Example: Kamen Rider Cyclone uses the Joker Maximum, to achieve a version of Double's main finisher, but this time, it's more of a Cyclone Extreme. Or if Trigger used Philip's memories in the Magnum instead of the Trigger memory itself? Just odd thoughts I'd throw in there.

...Also, working on my own Gaia-Class Rider...could use some input if it's alright with you. If that's ok, feel free to send word back. I'll need all the help I can get.

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Oh I got plans my friend but if you want to talk shop...let's do it in PMs

Minimal is good, I mean the japanese words are kinda crucial for Ichigo's dialouge and ethnicity.

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That is true, sad thing is I can't seem to find a reliable translator for some words besides my favorite sub text group, TV Nihon -it's where I get all of my sub TV shows when it comes to Tokusatsu and a few anime/music videos.

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Tsukasa-sempai may or may not be appearing in the story unless I can or figure out a reliable way to get hi to Equestria besides a massive Dopant attack that Ichigo can't handle on he own. Of course she will not be the only human in Equestria in a few chapters. :pinkiehappy:

A female descendent of a certain masked rapier wielding Spanish Fox with her own set of Gaia Memories will appear with a gift for Ichigo. :trollestia:

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I kinda do, mostly because I don't want to push or scare away potential readers with the Japanese, :twilightsheepish: even if I do translate it either in the story or in the author's comments. :facehoof:

BTW in the Kamen Rider W series, some dopants had the ability to grew into giants -not Super Sentai/Power Rangers 'make my monster grow' tall but close enough- and I need to figure out how to have Eternal fight at their level. I was thinking a Gundam or something similar but I'm not sure. What do you guys think?

2579447 well, i wouldnt use a GUNDAM myself, it kind of breaks the whole Kamen Rider thing...but a blending of Senai could work, Decade made an appearance in Samurai Sentai Shinkenger, and the Shinkengers appeared in Decade...though perhaps...something in a more Mahou Sentat Magiranger would be more appropriate for Equestria, another of Kami-sammas little gifts, a Titan Forme. oh, and i did some homework, although the honourific -sama shows great respect...it is -dono that is used for a lord (see Samurai Sentai Shinkenger for an example..)

Well I kind of meant Gundam like -mainly because that is my favorite show. My idea was have it modeled after a gundam -like 00 or Strike- but have it a fusion of magic and technology. The idea came to me when I was reading Andrew Joshua Talon's Hands where his version of Equestria sometimes have object from the nearby human world get transported into Equestria. -little sneak peek of what I'm planning :trollestia:-

Anyways, My idea was for Ichigo to find the remains of a Gundam -haven't decided which one, maybe 00- and with the help of a secret part of Canterlot's government rebuild it to work not only on magic but also on the power from the Gaia Memories.

2597632 well, that could still work for the Titan form. the Magiranger used a spell to become their mecha, but say that Eternal finds a GUNDAM, a) where is she going to keep it, b) how will she maintain or resupply it and c) how can she mount up quickly if needed? the Titan system is far faster and easier to control, plus u could work in the Maximum attacks easily

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I think i'll leave my answer as to how Ichigo would restock/repair the Gundam for the next chapter... :trollestia:

Thought now that I think about it, their may be a way to combine the Titan form with a Gundam... Ever heard of Star Driver:Kagayaki no Takuto???

so, will u be getting back to this story anytime soon?

I will, just having some trouble working out a few kinks to the next chapter.

Well that is awesome. Hey can you make spike accel? The guy has the heart to be that kamen rider and he really needs something to help his friends. Also I got an oc rider you can use. He is kamen rider wild. His Gaia memories are based on animals. Actually elements and animals. His default form is heat-wolf. His driver is a modified double-driver that is silver with the slots looking like claws. He has fourth generation memories or t3 Gaia memories. His armor is crimson and has a wolf theme. His finisher is called blazing howl. He has the tiger, fox, and hawk memories plus the cyclone,metal, and twilight memories. Like double he has the now count your sins phrase but it is instead now count up your dark sins. His fighting style depends on the memory.

The story is good so far. My only gripe is that Eternal is my less favoret Kamen Rider

Minimal works because it's Kamen Rider. Stuff like Henshin, and catch phrases should be good enough. Just have the curses and what not that would be in Japanese in italics like this chapter. Also, on the discussion of huge monster fights, why not use a broken down G Gundam? The only reason I recommend that is so you can get away with cheesy lines (like "Take this! My love, my anger, and all of my rage! SHINING FINGER SWORD!!" That is an actual line in the dub.). There are few shows with such glorious cheesiness, but if you don't use it, then I am fine with that.

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They should have done better with the attack name.

SHINING SABRE!

Will the story ever be updated again I find it very interesting

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