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Bookish Delight
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wow.
i dont like scootabuse, but if there's scootalove later on, i shall tolerate it with a VENGEANCE as i track this flawless, well-written story.
first off, your grammar is near flawless. i say near because i didnt notice any flaws, but they may have been there.
VERY interesting start-up here. your intro was good, and character development is also pretty spot on. you asked questions that we now need answers to. every good intro should do this, and youve done fabulously.
i sense scootabuse
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Actually, this story began because I wholeheartedly love Scootaloo.
It is for her. But she'll still have to work for it.
And thank you.
you gave pinke a harier jump jet. u mad! but eny way MOOOOOOOORE!!!
I got to ask, what cause Scootaloo to break up from Rainbow Dash ?
Also, poor Pinkie's a failure at proper new broadcasting.
NIce start to an interesting storyline, and I wish to encourage you to keep putting up the good work.
i barely understand what the buck is happening, but i can't wait for the next chapter.
Who is the mysterious Watchmare? Could it be Trixie? My guess is yes!
(On another hoof, they say nopony has ever seen Fluttershy and the Watchmare in the same room together...)
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Thank you!
And your question(s) will be answered by the story's end, so worry not. :)
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Hee hee! Future chapters will reveal the identity of Watchmare... and very possibly, her power.
I've never been so confused and I bucking love it.
Really interesting start for the story!
If you don't mind me asking (and if this can be answered without spoilers), is Spike going to be a central character to the plot?
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Spike is a part of the running B-plot involving Pinkie Pie.
SWAG
I always love/hate it when writers use the old technique of not telling you the backstory for awhile to keep you hooked. This is gonna be epic!
when can we expect more? just wanna make sure this doesn't die...
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Oh, don't worry, I have no intention of letting this "die." It's too much fun to write.
However, to ensure quality, I tend to take longer than most writers.
Chapter 2 is finished and currently in the editing stages, which can take a week in itself--and that's perfect timing since I'm waiting to make sure next week's episode doesn't seriously mess with my plans. After that, though, we're live! Please look forward to it!
Haven't read the second chapter yet, but i have to say that when it popped up in my e-mail, I swear to god i jizzed my pants
just a note, when you wrote "With that, she gestured to a unicorn and pegasus sitting in the seats beside her. 'Please join me in welcoming Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle!'" ......Apple Bloom isn't a pegasus, just thought you should be aware
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(facehoof) That's where a fried brain from sweating all the complicated details gets you.
Thanks very much! Fixing now.
I was listening to Dragonforce while reading.
It was glorious.
I think Pinkie is going to have to apologize to more than just Luna for that pun.
Excellent! You do an awesome job with details! I just have one question because I think I might have missed this. Is Scootaloo, i mean Fireball, always surrounded by a glowing orange light now? Or was that just for her entrance?
That was great.
Might I humbly suggest what I consider an appropriate theme song?
Great update to the storyline as it seems that there is some real hostility between Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash. Dash, must of done something pretty bad enough to set Scootaloo off like this.
Nice update showcasing Pinkie's unique way of broadcasting this race, along with her helpful co-hosts.
I wonder what's up with the Twilight Sparkle cliffhanger and does it have something to do with the overall race ?
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as I do hope for a patched up friendship between Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo.
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I would definitely consider either of those music choices appropriate.
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Varies. The Trail/Aura of Awesome(tm) varies in intensity depending on how much energy a pegasus is expending at the time. If they're on auto-pilot, it can be not there at all or pretty light. If they're really pouring it on, it can become quite wide and bright!
Just what is Zecora up to? A "pact" with Twilight? It sounds like Scootaloo's metamorphosis into Fireball was... foretold... and then they tried to prevent it? I don't even care about the race results now - I want to know what's going on!
So is it gonna take just as long for the next chapter?
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Most likely.
313543 it will be worth the wait
Hnng what will happen. I hope it's a tie I dont wanna see rainbow or scoots have there dreams crushed.
It seems like another story is here from you, impressive.
This Watchmare... she seems mysterious that I am thinking about Watchmen.
But neverless!
I must read more to find out who this mare is and what is her true purpose.
Great Chapter!
I love love love love it!!
GAAAAH!!!
WHAT! IS! GOING! ON!?
Seriously, that ending through me for a loop!
So many questions!
ummmm not to question the logic of cartoon ponys, but Scootaloo suvives in space?
Heres to hoping this story finishes...though last comments were 83 weeks ago..im almost ready to just archive.
Well ill be watching for that random update!
Daww.. We didn't even get to find out what was going on!
Holy crap, Gundam! Yomigaeru, yomigaeru, yomigaeru, Gandamu!
I'm hooked, and this has been canceled. Sadface.
...
Cancelled at two out of five chapters, high-tech timeskip setting, DBZ dueling, reporter Pinkie, vengeful Scootaloo, downright saucy Sparity teasing...
Well.
This is different.
(not even gonna bother trying to call out all the references but they do not go unnoticed)