I love the story, but I really wish you would look for a proof reader. Fixing your (I'm sorry) many errors would really up the enjoyment of reading this
", their are only rainbows after rain." That is brilliant! I have never heard that version of it before. Ive heard things like "even after the longest nights, morning always comes" "there can be no dark without light" and so on. But "there are only rainbows after rain" that is brilliant! it works in the spelling too which in my opinion is a double whammy! -laughing in awe- im giving a light just for the sheer brilliance of that little saying! LOL
all that aside, this is an excellent story so far.
AWESOME CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!!
thank you
next chapter the end noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I love the story, but I really wish you would look for a proof reader. Fixing your (I'm sorry) many errors would really up the enjoyment of reading this
GOOD make More Ch PLZ
2892764 yes mr president
This story, it's Amazing!!
Aww, you're ending it so soon? I was hoping for a lot more...
i really want this story to either be longer or updated more frequently. but over all this story is awesome and i hope you continue this at least.
Great story so far. Few mistakes in this chapter but it was a good one hope you keep belting out chapters like this.
Soo Sweet!
augsome
", their are only rainbows after rain."
That is brilliant! I have never heard that version of it before. Ive heard things like "even after the longest nights, morning always comes" "there can be no dark without light" and so on.
But "there are only rainbows after rain" that is brilliant! it works in the spelling too which in my opinion is a double whammy! -laughing in awe- im giving a light just for the sheer brilliance of that little saying! LOL
all that aside, this is an excellent story so far.