Well first I liked it, however I dislike the unrealistically of his body (size and cum amount I doubt he was from marilith) not a big deal its a fanfiction.
during that whole talk about marking i was amping up like "they gotta do a bed bongo" and getting a headache pondering what his reaction would be when HE figured it out. "You have to cum on me........a lot." I braced...whats his reaction? "I love marking" ...... seems legit
I like!
She's going to be very crunchy in the morning
Awesome chapter bro.
Enjoy the cream pie
I love marking.
3 inches wide??? That's the size of a wrist! Unless you meant circumference, then it was tiny!
Doesn't he get marked by her?
Well first I liked it, however I dislike the unrealistically of his body (size and cum amount I doubt he was from marilith) not a big deal its a fanfiction.
good story so far a few spelling errors but i hardly notice them but all in all still a good story cant wait for the next chapter
mhmm just as i thought. . . -rubs chin in thought
my mind is liking wierder and wierder shit. . .
but hey . . . i aint complaining
great chapter bro-dawg
-brohoofs-
great chapter marking sounds like a lot of work just saying XD
... That was strange...
Next chapter?
i mean the prospect of cumming on her is hot, but rubbing it in and her being all crusty later... ah well still very hot.
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Oh god, I can't stop laughing haha.
not bad so far
during that whole talk about marking i was amping up like "they gotta do a bed bongo" and getting a headache pondering what his reaction would be when HE figured it out.
"You have to cum on me........a lot."
I braced...whats his reaction?
"I love marking"
...... seems legit
This story takes place in a magical world filled with talking cartoon ponies and this is still the most unrealistic part of the whole thing.
Nine inches long lmao 😂 someone’s in denial!