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AshleyFlutter


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It was supposed to be a joyous day, the birth of Shining Armor and Princess Cadence’s new baby filly. But that was before Queen Chrysalis showed up, before she stole the child away. Before Princess Celestia became trapped in a coma she may never wake up from. Now, it will take more then just the elements of harmony to save the kingdom. It will take an ancient magic, a magic hidden within the mysterious, perilous lands outside of Equestria. Only Twilight and her friends can save the kingdom, but some pony is messing with Twilight’s head, every night she is haunted by visions of princess Luna, guiding her to the magic they need to save Equestria. But is it really her? Or is Queen Chrysalis leading them all into a trap.
Characters appearing in Beyond Equestria: Twilight Sparkle Apple Jack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Princess Cadence, Shining Armor, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Queen Chrysalis, Discord, and introducing Princess Aria Glimmer (daughter of Cadence and Shining Armor)
Cameos: Spike, Zecora, the CMC, Big Mac, Granny Smith

Note: though these events happen after the events of MLP:FIM, Twilight is not an Alicorn Princess in this fic, other then that everything else is pretty much cannon
This fic is going to be set up more like a novel and though the chapters are shorter, (partially to build suspense) there are going to be more of them

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I have one suggestion, try to make some paragraphs out of the wall of text, but overall I really like the plot.
P.s. maybe you can read my story my day in ponyville

This is a good story :twilightsmile:

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