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A Big Happy Family

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From the outside, it seems like the Apple Family are happy-go-lucky farmers and have always been that way. They don't have any problems and they seem to always have a smile on their face. But some tragedies have changed this family forever.

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Crystal Secret

Crystal Secret #1 · Feb 15th, 2013 · · ·

That was really sad.

Lovely little story.

Loveablecrazygirl13

Loveablecrazygirl13 #2 · Feb 16th, 2013 · · ·

No offense but it seemed a little... too fast. It felt like a story where you killed some important secondary chraters without any thought...
Also, I didn't really find it that sad. Just..confusing,short,simple, and like a backstory.
Please don't take my commet too seroiusly but do take it serouis please. just some constructive critismim from a helpful(ish) person.
Also, Zalgressa is stalking me and I have no sleep. Any idea? Because if I dont get sleep soon....The cupcakes tune is already in my head....and i know where to find some "Ingredients"