• Member Since 10th Sep, 2011
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Kickass222urmom


Don't spend your whole youth saving up for your old age, instead spend your youth doing what you want. Deal with the rest later. You'll be forgotten in 100 years, so might as well enjoy life now.

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Valentine "Val" Cox has been part of the Revelations Agency for most of his life, but he has never received high end orders. That is until he is told to check out a demon's portal that was manifesting in a destroyed building. But little did he know, the portal he steps through leads him to find the one person the Agency had been looking for, the source of all the destruction and death that had plagued the world.
But, he never expected to find a city full of people being attacked by demons, or that the people were actually talking pastel ponies!
Follow Valentine as he saves the lands of Equestria from a demonic plague of horror and death.

Credit for the Cover Art goes to: PoisonSt

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 18 )

Apparently, you're alive.

FIRST ....

Hes back

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next step. get on skype more

2142325 Your back! Woo! we missed you man.:pinkiehappy:

Will read later, very sick right now :pinkiesick:

AND SO IT BEGINS AAAAAAAAAAAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA

interesting how a story of damned(dead) gets posted by the newly risen

Those holy hand grenades will be useful if Val comes across a killer rabbit.

Is this going to be a story that you actually finish?

Sorry had to say that. Anyways, nice to see that you're alive!

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As long as people keep reading it, I will do my best XD

Well, one chapter in and I dislike the protagonist.:unsuresweetie:

Also, you need to be more descriptive of settings. All you really gave us to go on were sewers and a building of the agency he works for. For all we know, it could be a hole in the ground with dirt walls.

Also, is this a crossover of anything, or is everything made up?

Horray! A Writer returns to writing written works! I hope future writing goes well for you dude:moustache:

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Yeah, sorry about the description. I however did that on purpose, as there is more to the story that will not be revealed in this story.

And if you don't like Valentine right now, then let's just say you'll hate him by next chapter.

Also, this is sort of a crossover, but it's really not. This story is a fanfiction of my own story that I've been writing to turn into a book. As of now, it's fifty chapters in and still not finished.

Apparently this looks a lot like Devil May Cry.

We need to talk about how you make protagonists Austin.

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I have yet to play that game XD I saw it at Gamestop, but bought NeverDead instead XD

2143737 Well believe me when I say the Devil May Cry series is absolutely epic! (Except for DMC 2. I don't know what to say about that one. :applejackunsure:)

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