• Member Since 25th Jan, 2012
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XionFate


Hello there! I'm just a simple teenage guy with a simple dream. write awesome fan-fictions for you guys to read. So give them a try and tell me what you think.

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Rainbow Dash gets Applejack into a world of trouble when her sonic rainboom goes wrong. As she begins to fear for her friends safety she discovers feelings for Applejack she had never known before. Now Rainbow sets out to find a way to express her feelings for Applejack, but she isn't the only one with feelings to express...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

wow O_O
the dreams...
the dream seeing
oh well i hope there'll be an explanation later :3

Looks good, gonna track this and give it a read later

cool yet oh so creepy i love it

O_O
give us moar?

'Moon' and 'you' do not rhyme. Plus, you rhymed 'have' with 'have'.

190593 Well, there's nothing wrong with rhyming the same word, and as for moon and you, Zecora is extremely difficult to write. I'm sorry it wasn't perfect. I thank you for the criticism though, any little bit helps.

Yeah.... So AJ basically just gave up one of her most defining traits, her place at the farm, part of who she is without barely a second thought.

Sorry, that's a bit to much of a stretch for me.

192801 I understand how that can be a bit of a stretch, but there is good reason for why I wrote it this way. Too often we see people rush into relationships and love without thinking, often times making reckless decisions with no thought that lead to terrible consequences. My goal was to capture this dilema in the story, and show the effects it can have. I'm sorry if it seems like too much of a stretch for you, but thanks for the criticism, ever little bit helps.

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