• Member Since 5th Nov, 2012
  • offline last seen Jul 11th, 2022

Fat1thatyoulove


Nov 7th "Maybe"

Sequels1

Comments ( 26 )

Remember this day, little ponies. From this moment forth, their love will last forever! Bwahahhaha *Cough* *cough* *Krhm*

Soap is that heavy,so how much did she buy?:rainbowhuh:

I'm happy to see the next story of the series is out and that I got my computer fix!!!:raritywink::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

What are you planning???!! I know something is up! Sending Discord to Earth?! Crazy! All the chaos there will make him invincible!
Besides that, keep going!:pinkiehappy:

2102818

lol, i'm surprised to see your name on the first day, I thought 13-15 might have been to long for you. :raritywink: jk, your're to good for that.

2103454

And now the waiting game. :coolphoto:

Ok just got though the first chapter....

Fatty, you always do some twist when I think I know the story sooooo is she pregnant or something else? Wait don't answer that! Wait yes...I mean no :raritydespair: IDK if I want to know!

watch me as i clap my hooves over 9000 times
then shoot a tree with a knife.

this is a great story and you must continue. you must ... you must :raritywink::ajsmug:

Great, Let the anger floweth forth

some thing is missing... hmpf...

Again her muffled voice calls back, “Not this early! No ponies even up!”

the ? is a bit mismatched ^^" and the second sentence is also an exclamation ^^... don't you think?

You your thoughts are a little uneasy as you stand outside of the door,

ha? i guess its a little mistake. ^^

*realized some thing* dud... i belief i mixing your Story with two others up in my memories... *gos back overlooking the former Maybe stories...*
oh yeah... Anon and RD had an... interlude... good I'm calmed again... i didn't mixed your story with them up ^^

but: the... interlude... isn't even mentioned until now, i mean even if it all is sorted out, at least a small strange feeling should be there between RD, Anon and Twi. what do you thing?

2103805... Twi pregnant... *starts to giggle fu*king excited!* ... YES! That would be a challenge too create the Storyline! ^^

*readers comment*

thanks Rainbow now I am going to be stuck in a book as a statue.

*"PFFFF HAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!"* great... :rainbowlaugh:

Rarity snaps herself from her daze, “oh yes, shall we!?” She picks the smallest beg from the pile as she trots down the stairs of the castle.

its a passive interobang Sentence ^^ its and exclaiming question (!?) ^^... not to be mixed up with an active interobang Sentence, an asking exclamation (?!)... yes... there is really a difference I was also confused that there is really a difference between them as i heard it the first time... lol...
*starts to laugh hard about his own detail knowledge* no one ever gets it right and no one ever cares about it :rainbowkiss:

“What was that!? Rainbow’s hair looks dull?!

*starts to tease you* ^^ you don't know much about using interobang and triple marks do you? ^^ [yoda]Worrying about it you don't must, youngling. Show you how too us it, i will.[/yoda] :derpytongue2:

Rainbow looks at her mane, “It’s not dull?” She looks up from her mane in with a confused face, “Wait why do I care, you smell like Twilight!

What do you mean with RD's first sentence? I didn't get the meaning of it. I mean, Anon said “What was that!? Rainbow’s hair looks dull?!”
Did RD ask or exclaim that here mane is dull? or did she even ask exclaiming(!?) that here mane shall be dull but now asking here self if it isn't? (RD asks here self in this case)
or do she exclaim asking(?!) if here mane is dull and exclaiming that it shell be (RD asks some one else in this case)?
know what... just us ?! if it is more an exclamation and !? if it is more an question... its far easier this way... :rainbowlaugh:

Rainbow turns to you and rubs her hoof to her neck, “um…I’m not going to hug you… but how long you guys going to stay here?”

saliently good, hits the feelings ^^

P.S. yes I know, I'm some times a royal pa*n in the... flank... :raritywink:

nothing contently to be said here ^^

maybe a little lack of commas here and there, but still good ^^

good work nothing to say here ^^

2103454... or insane ^^... i mean he probably have never beliefed that out there are morons with are even more chaotic than him self and even also angry and insane...

Fatty good job ^^... and you are a evil, evil pony :raritywink:
This chapter is until now good balanced. ^^

*waits for more* ^^

2106450

I love the way a few comments ago you used Yoda talking and then later in the story I had the character think of Yoda....stop getting into my head :pinkiecrazy:

2106468

LOL, I find it fun to see comments that try to guess the future stories, mainly for the simple fact the story is already done and I know how it ends. I must say though you guys are getting better at picking me a part. :pinkiecrazy:

Also Leux ( !? ) my brian hurts from reading all the comments about that. :fluttercry:

But thank you for pointing them out, I have to change some things now :derpytongue2:

2106326

but: the... interlude... isn't even mentioned until now, i mean even if it all is sorted out, at least a small strange feeling should be there between RD, Anon and Twi. what do you thing?

I bring it up later in the story...fire soap = uneasy thoughts.

I should really comment better these things are all over the place :rainbowderp:

2106326

:yay: yay
I'm not the only one who thought that!

Comment posted by Adm1thitman deleted Feb 12th, 2013

Holy shit does does Twi have morning sickness?!:twilightoops:

Pony ninjas.....

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

YOU'VE JUST WON ONE FREE INTERNET MEME!!!!!

2138823 that would be amazing.:pinkiegasp:

Celestia smiled, “Pony magic as I am sure you are aware is generated from happy feelings, and those feelings affect our world around us in every way.” She pause for a minute as she looks you over, “As a human you can absorb and charge magic in any way you want without you even being aware of it, as Twilight has said in her letters.”

hmmmm I wonder where ive heard that from before :3

3546290

Magic = Force

So dose that make Twilight his sister? :twilightoops:

... No...No it doesn't. :trollestia:

Login or register to comment