Love Grimdark primarily and also like some other stuff, the rest is classified!
Meet Denza, an ordinary tribe wolf who's respected among his kind.
After loosing everything he knows to the Griffins, Denza must swallow his pride and carniverous cravings to be accepted amongest the ponies or will it be to much for him!
Could he be able to make Equestria his new home or does his heart belong to the forest....
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Not bad, not bad
Feels a little rushed and Denza turned his thoughts to the ponies a bit quick, but it's short right now, that's understandable, flows fairly well otherwise. Tracking for now, let's see where you take this, hmm?
That is the intoduction, I plan on Denza cronfronting only one pony and making them keep him a secret untill chapter 3-4. Problem I'm facing is which pony he confronts....
I will eventually redo the introduction (hopefully around chapter 5) so it doesnt seem as rushed!
To add, of course he's going to turn to the ponies quickly, who's he going to go to? The Griffins? No, they'll kill him on sight! Dragons? I don't think they'll want him either. Zebras aren't to fond of them either!
I like where its going
Someone like my story :'D
Chapter 3 is out, you learn more about Denza, as well as an introduction to 3 new characters!
I honestly like this story. Although i feel the transition from, "My whole pack is gone" to "Maybe the ponies can help me" was fairly fast. Other then a couple spelling errors(nothing big really) to maybe using Denza's name less when describing a string of his actions, it's a fairly well written fic that i shall keep my eye on.
2111002 thank you for the feed back. Once I get some I will refurbish all three chapters before moving on.
As for the speedy decesion for turning to the ponies, he had only cake to feed him. Only being one wolf he couldn't take any worth while pray down, and if he hunted smaller animals THAT would have been looked into and blamed on Denza. He had VERY little choice...
As I said, chapter three has been updated! I will now work on 1 & 2 while I work on 4...
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