I'm just a guy who loves to write.
Rainbow Dash wakes up with a searing pain in her head fifteen days after a serious accident. Her friends tell her that she was in a coma but a series of strange visions make her think otherwise. Why does she know of things that don't exist in Equestria and who is this man that keeps appearing in her dreams? Only a certain princess holds the key to Rainbow Dash finally finding peace.
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Well, closure, warm feels, okay.
Kinda wish it was a richer fic... more in depth.
Nonetheless, good job.
Kind of a nice twist with the half-brother thing, but overall fantastic work as always.
and mustache
Here, have epic Dash
(Wow, that rimed!)
*sniff* *sniff sniff* *bangs face on keyboard crying Niagra Falls* Dashie still remembered him! That is so beautiful! This was amazing! *continues sobbing*
I liked it
THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!
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Twilight and Pinkie weren't standing right outside of Rainbow Dash's house. It's stated that they were waiting down on the path that runs along the ground by Rainbow Dash's floating house.
Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
*sniff, sniff* that was wonderfull *sniff, sniff*
Hey, I actually have an idea for how Daniel discovers the truth about her 'sister'
. With your permission, I would like to do it.
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Sure. Go ahead. I'd be very interested to read it when you're done.
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the feels man, the feels.
MLD was the first fanfic i ever read. And i loved every word of it. I've been hesitant to read sequels to it cause i didn't think they could ever do it justice. But you man good sir! You did it justice. Very well done.
WHY WHY WHY!!!!! *sniff sniff* why cant she stay
this story was excellent, amazing and so well thought out. thank you for making a sequel, it was good to read what might have come next.
Having read a few other sequels to MLD, I have to say this one brought me the most closure.
Job well done.
One nit-pick, and nothing major as I can see why you might have done it.
MLD did a good job of not applying a name to the main character, just seemed odd putting a name to the character. (Not that I disapprove just found it odd).Or maybe I missed it mentioning his name.(I'm pretty sure it didn't) Ok arguing with myself now.
Bleh
Anyways good story, like and fav for you!
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Thank you. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.
Yeah, the dad remained unnamed in the original story but, given the circumstances of what occurs in my story, I felt that I kinda had to give him a name. I think it would have been odd if Celestia had referred to him as 'human' or if his wife constantly referred to him as 'honey'. That wouldn't have really sounded completely natural, in my opinion. But I'm glad that it didn't bother you that much and that you were still able to enjoy my story.
I loved it awwwwwww
I swear I'm not a heartless person....sniff....just got a strong heart on the inside and I cry inside my heart....sniff....good story got me to the heart
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No. It's just a random name I came up with. The DB Cooper coincidence is pretty funny though.
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It's definitely an interesting mystery. I always love a good unsolved mystery.