• Member Since 11th Apr, 2012
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Fluttershy meets an alluring but shy earth pony mare. A fiercely apologetic and awkward shyness duel erupts.

Rated teen for sexual undertones. And then again for sexual overtones.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

It's a shy-off...

:rainbowlaugh: ah,poor Flutter's, this was funny, you did a great job.

This definitely works as a oneshot, but I'd love to read more.

Some mostly minor grammar errors, but cute so far. And what an odd little bit of innuendo at the end there.

....that just happened.

:rainbowlaugh: Get it Flutter's now that what I call control:yay: Very, very nice. Angel's a jackass but that's what makes him awesome

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