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Level Dasher


You can't give up your laughter 'cause you're scared of a little pain; rainbows won't up the sky unless you let it rain. —Autumn Blaze

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A strange creature named Yoshi from the Mushroom Kingdom has appeared in fair Equestria. An unknown threat has caused strange occurrences back home, and he needs assistance. Does the root of the problem lie in this new land he has descended upon?

After the origin of the threat is discovered, Yoshi is delayed by an unfortunate injury, giving him ample time to make new friends and form new relationships in Equestria. When the method and opportunity to save the Mushroom Kingdom and go home are revealed, will he do it? With all the new friends he's made, Yoshi may find that leaving Equestria might be more painful than he thought.

Will Yoshi ultimately choose to stay with his new Equestrian pals? Can his Mushroom Kingdom family conquer the danger without him?

Warning: There are non-canon references abound in this story. Be prepared.

Edited and Proofread by Shahrazad.
Cover Picture by Norm.

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 33 )

>yoshi
Oh hey, that's a cool idea! And he may get along with Sp--
>sex tag
>SEX TAG
>SEX TAG
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...Yep. Nice use of Cake. Relax- Spike has a tag because he has a pivotal role to play. This isn't a dinosaur-dragon-pony-orgy kind of sex tag.

Wasn't as NSFW as I expected. Good then, good.

Fuckloving Fluttershy,(tries to come up with more F.F. phrases)

Comment posted by Level Dasher deleted Jan 7th, 2013

Going to guess right now, that there is going to be some heavily detailed explanations on how Yoshi's reproduce sometime in the future. (Thus explaining the sex tag without being clop.)

Well, it's official. I want to see this update soon. The story is just too funny not too. Besides the fact that I want to see if the infamous power foods make their return. (In Super Mario Galaxy 2 and several of the other Mario adventures their were power ups designed as fruit, vegetables, etc. that gave Yoshi powers. Also, Pirate Yoshi on Nightmare Night please?)

Ach, more waiting! I'm running outta good crossovers to read!

Wow, I've been following this story for a while and I'm glad that it's going to be updated soon, I've waited.......and now I'm ready for more waiting lol, take as much time as you need :P

2675927 Not quite- you've still got the epilogue...
So whadja think? It's my first fic so I'm looking for feedback.
Also, keep a lookout for my next one. Not sure when I'll get to publish the first chapters, but it'll hopefully be soon now that this one's complete.

And thus, ends another story....If I forget to look for the next fic and end up going "Why haven't I noticed this?" like I usually do...I will be annoyed with myself :3

It would be nice to see a sequel, but it's all on you to be honest :/ I got nothing.

I would read the sequel. I have no ideas for it.

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I never realized that this story had a sex tag on it.
:facehoof: I've got to look at the tags more.

3604811
Is that a big problem? There isn't really a ton of it going on— only one or two somewhat detailed scenes. The rest is mostly just implied.

3604825
It's not a problem at all.
I just have to look at the tags more often.:twilightsheepish:
Don't worry I'm still gonna read the story.

Why does this have so many downvotes?

Just wanted to know if it was a quality thing, or if people are turned off by the tags or premise, and then downvote it without reading.

3821522
You probably don't want to hear an answer from the author due to biases, but I've been told that one of the likely reasons for downvotes is that it sounded like a fun clop idea that turned out not to be clop. On the other hand, another reason was that people didn't like the idea of the NSFW aspect between certain characters, but as backed by one of the other commenters, it's not really that bad.
Again, you probably don't want my answer, but please do read and give me any feedback. :twilightsmile:

I don't think you should rewrite out spike's translations unless they are something different than what was actually said.

You could just put, "spike translated" or whatnot.

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I knew that would get tiresome. Don't worry, it doesn't happen through the entire story— I switch to a different system after chapter 5.

He swallowed that Diamond Dog WHOLE!”

why didn't twilight say anything to that?

7993790 Combination of two things:
1) I originally thought of writing more exclamations than the ones I wrote, but I didnt want to take up too much space with them. You could say some of them were being shouted simultaneously and kind of blurred together, like that one, so she didn't fully catch it. :facehoof:
2) They were more focused on the fact that Yoshi was still injured than anything else (yes, even Twilight will focus on injury more than knowledge occasionally :twilightsheepish:).

Where's the original draft?

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The link to it is on the word 'here' in the first paragraph of the A/N. If you're looking for it to see the original M-rated content, I really wouldn't bother. It's so minimal—like maybe five sentences—that there really isn't much of a difference (it was just enough that it warranted the rating, though). Actually, I'm gonna add that.

Melons... Is that a Yoshi's island reference? If so great research.

This story is not as well written as most but it has so much charm to it that I couldn't help myself from binging it!

I would still love to see what happens between the two in the Mushroom Kingdom maybe? If only. Such an odd place to end off.

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Thank you! :twilightsmile: This was the first fic I ever wrote, so it's definitely not nearly as polished as some of my more recent ones. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

I flip-flopped a lot trying to figure out whether or not I would write a sequel to this, but I think I finally decided I was done with it. Especially with the time difference, it would have caused all kinds of havoc in Equestria with Fluttershy not being there, depending on how long she wanted to stay. :twilightoops:

Wow very interesting start there so Yoshi got worried about Mario and he's taking a long time so he decided to go down there and see what's going on

OH NO. The creature didn’t understand me… This was going to be a problem. I had no way to explain to this local who appeared to be a—horse with wings?—who and what I am, or even how I got there. I wasn't sure of that either, to be honest. Still, the creature intrigued me. I clearly wasn’t in the Mushroom Kingdom anymore. Was this the main makeup of the population? I wondered if they had any other species around…

Oh boy just like Pokemon nobody can't understand the language that they speak especially Yoshi who's not a Pokemon I just used an the example so this is going to be a hard communication with other ponies

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