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That_Random_Pony


Sometimes I wonder why I write. Then I look back at my stories and remember: I have a story to tell. And a LOT of mistakes to correct.

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The humans called me murderer. Freak. Monster.

My people called me warrior. Heir. Hero.

Them? The ponies? Her?

Friend. Family. Lover.

It's been a long time since anyone ever called me that, and it's even stranger with "love". But can they know me truly? Can I trust them with the truth? And more importantly… can I protect them from the truth?

…from myself?

Thanks to Panzertank for the cover art!

Chapters (61)
Comments ( 534 )

First to comment on my own fic! Anyway, I already told you where I got this idea, and if you plan to keep reading this just ignore alien talk. You could try to sound it out, I suggest you just read parentheses. Like, comment, favorite, and have a great day everypony. BROHOOF!

This has potential. You have my fav and follow for now good sir.:moustache:

:rainbowlaugh: o shit son celestia is out for blood

Then the truth is slowly reveiled

This is certainly shaping up to be something epic. It's kinda reminding me of the Daniel X novels. I've noticed a few grammar errors in there, and if you want, I could offer to help with that.

This made me happy. :eeyup:

wow great story man. cant wait to see more.

Love the backgrounds you created for Tony and Dan, fantastic story so far, keep it up.
However I have noticed a few minor spelling mistakes, hope you don't mind me pointing that out...

2278938 Thanks, fix those as soon as I can

priity good cant wait to see more

As always brilliant chapter, cant wait to see how this turns out.
Have fun during the holidays
-Toast-

this is gonna be good

...Blueblood just asked to have a blank grave in the middle of nowhere...:pinkiegasp:

Only blood and pain shall sate my anger, a severed horn or limb delivered by blade will do perhaps. >:[

Even i want to kill blueblood now

Okay. I stopped reading at not human. So what is he? There is a human tag, so why have it if he is not human. And please, don't tell me to read and find out. If he is not human, or ends up changing into a pony I don't want to read. So can you please answer. All you have o say is that he is human, or to just move along.

welp he's fucked, not that anyone cares.

Please geld blueblood... that and remove his horn.. no don't kill him let him live with the pain of knowing he will never have any(more) kids and that he is now a lowely earthpony... please... that or have celestia banish him to the moon or luna or both either works fine. Banishment to the moon would get In Tony's good side maybe.

I say you skin him after brakeing his legs rip out his tongue then burn him alive on a wooden cross then i will be happy with blueballs knowing he died a VERY pain full death just saying:trixieshiftleft:

2336251 The human tag is there because A) there is a human in the story and B) said human plays a pivotal role in this story alongside Tony. While the main character isn't human, his dear companion is, hence the human tag

Loving the story! this is certainly a masterfully crafted work of art.

2351270 *summons inner Canterlot Voice* THANK YOU!!!

2351561 You are certainly welcome. Personally, Luna is my favorite pony in all of equestria. :yay:

you can have a well earned fav:moustache:from me and a happy easter:yay:

awesome chapter! im glad i decided to read this story its great:pinkiehappy: i cant wait for the next chapter, thanks for oploading:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

Zakora..:rainbowlaugh: I think you mean Zecora.

Awesome chapter btw :twilightsmile:

2365303 No it's Zakora. When I watch MLP FIM I watch with captions. If you watch it with captions or subtitles it says Zakora

2365350 Huh, that's neat.
Oh, in your description you said you would be changing the rating when you add the... mature scenes. I just thought you might be able to have those scenes as a separate story so you can keep this one's rating down.

2366504 Yeah I was kinda thinkin' about that. Thanks anyways!

Loving the story, keep it up! this has been one of my favorite ongoing stories that I've read on here.

really I would have thought tony would have went into battle mode when everyone jumpedout.

2377159 Thought about that, but how do you explain to everypony you went through ten years of secret warfare with an alien race trying to wipe out your own alien race? Just sayin'.

2377180 But even Twi and the group would kinda pick up the reasons after knowing what he has been through. to late for it now but still I can picture him doingit lol.

dan and tony are the names of some of my favourite youtubers:rainbowlaugh:lol i just realised this:rainbowlaugh: also known as skitscape and fawds lol is that intentional or just pure coincidence

Cool!:pinkiehappy:
Writers block sucks...:unsuresweetie:

yay:yay: awesome chapter is awesome

2336251
Alien, and he doesn't turn into a pony so far...

2387343
What kind of alien? Is he basically a human? If he isn't there is no point for the human tag.

2387404
There are humans, and the main character seem to be basically human... just more powerful.

2387451
Okay then. Thank you for letting me know.

this story just gets better and better:pinkiehappy:

I wanted to save the updated chapters in this one for after I got done with another story I've been reading... But I couldn't help it!!!!:fluttercry: Luna is my favorite pony of all time and this just makes her even better!

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