• Member Since 2nd Feb, 2013
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Pony Montana


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Quite well written, although I find it hard to believe Twilight wouldn't recognize her own story on first sight.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it, I wasn't sure if people would even bother clicking on it. ^^

2085347

Thank you, this is my first semi-serious piece of writing in a long time actually. I will admit, I hadn't quite thought things completely through when I was writing this... The idea just came to me while finishing some homework, but I couldn't focus until I had written this little tidbit. I also forgot to incorporate Spike into this, somehow...

When next chapter because I love it so much:rainbowhuh:

2085857

Well, you see... I can't give you an expected date for the next chapter. I have a few big assignments each worth a decent amount of my mark in some school subjects, and I doubt the ideas will flow as easily as they did when I was writing the first chapter, so...

The best I can tell you is to cross your fingers and hope for the best. >.>

came for the clop and stayed for the story
nice work~!:twilightsmile:

2085844 No one remembers Spike. Hell, I forgot to incorporate Spike in my story and no one has said a THING! I think you'll be fine.

a Simple question to know if I going to follow your fic, If this is going to be a TwiDash Fic ?

If yes I will follow
If not, I out of here.

Thank in advance.

Cédric

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To be honest, I was torn between Dash x Trixie and Twilight x Dash, just because I think Dash x Trixie would be pretty fun to write about, considering their personalities. :P

But the story is mainly about Twilight and Rainbow, so yes, I am planning on making this TwiDash.

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You, my friend, are a good guy.
Now where is this "add favourite" button, already.:rainbowlaugh:

Cédric

... Not sure if this will be good, but the first chapter isn't bad. I will track for now, and see where this goes.

Everything is better with Trixie.

I liked the Dash/Pinkie scene quite a bit.

Can't wait to see what's next :twilightsmile: I wonder how long Twilight will be able to get away with running from RD.

Twilight casted the teleport spell after picking up Trixie.:ajbemused:

Otherwise nice chapter :pinkiehappy:

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That's nice to hear. ^^ Pinkie has to be one of the hardest characters to write dialogue with, since she seems so jumpy and random...

Kinda wish for longer chapters, but the story has my interest nonetheless. : )

want more :twilightsmile:

2342423 Gah, I pretty much forgot about this story. I've been so caught up in school work, studying, music, etc...

Thoughts of a Gildaloo story have also been super tempting...

Anyway, thanks for reminding me. I know that updates should not take this long, but I honestly have not had much time. I shall try to update this sometime in the near future *cough*, but no promises...

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