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Silver Eyes
Silver Eyes #1 · Jan 30th, 2013 · · ·
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And here I was about to compliment you about the quality of your story

Bear
Bear #3 · Jan 30th, 2013 · · ·
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The spelling errors are what killed it for me. :facehoof:

Izarra Kiania
Izarra Kiania #7 · Feb 4th, 2013 · · ·
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ALL OF MY UPVOTES.

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Thanks for the gif!

ethro cloudsdine
ethro cloudsdine #9 · Apr 10th, 2013 · · ·
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That was actually very good, i'm starting to become more of a fan of 'second person' stories. Good job :heart:

SolidFire
SolidFire #10 · May 13th, 2013 · · ·
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I am pleasantly surprised by this story. There was some good storyline to go with the rutting. I am looking forward to reading more stories by you in the future. Keep up the great writing!

Caelus-Streak
Caelus-Streak #11 · Sep 30th, 2013 · · ·
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One of my guilty pleasures is this:twilightblush:. This is something to put my mind off of being sick for a good while :pinkiesick:

panzerbrony
panzerbrony #12 · Apr 29th, 2014 · · ·
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pretty good of a story
pros:
interesting use of the second view format
very descriptive
a lot of detail was given
CONS:
a couple of errors in grammar and spelling

OVERALL:9/10
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Blue_Ace_Bass
Blue_Ace_Bass #13 · Sep 22nd, 2014 · · ·
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you should try and wright a sequel.Good story as well if i do say so myself:ajsmug:

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