• Member Since 29th Jan, 2012
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The Drifting Bard


a depressed music student with nothing better to do that write stories.

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this is ANOTHER HiE fic... but hopefully it won't be too bad. (takes place after season Whatever, Major characters will be tagged as they appear)


AND WE'RE ON HIATUS! RE-WRITE AND HEAVY EDITS/CHANGES ARE INCOMING (it'll take a few months)


All I could remember was the cold. its bitter sting on my extremities.
my frost-bitten hands were shoved into my coat pockets in a feeble attempt to find warmth.
My only option was to keep moving. as the wind grew stronger, I felt a small barrier of ice forming on my legs.
I pushed on, seeking the small light in the bleak blinding whiteness of the tundra.

when I reached my destination, all went black.


I was no longer cold.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 41 )

Potential...

I'll fave for now. I'll like or unfave with the next chapter.

hahaha! what a poor sod. delivers a one liner and then trips down the stairs! hahahaha!

followin'

I know I said, "MOAR", but you REALLY shouldn't rush it.

2337986 nah it's cool, sometimes I get hit with inspiration and stuff just flows out.

2339024 Oh good. I was worried you were one of those that try to get it done as quickly as possible.

2341244 heh, Last time I tried to do that, I threw my idea way out of whack

"Because Reason"

:rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:

Hilarious stuff.

:fluttercry:

Same, man.

:fluttercry:

Same.

FIRST COMMENT!!!:yay:

(Sorry, had to)

Celestia: "How do you feel about nobles?"
Me: :rainbowhuh:
Character: "Do I get to piss them off?"
Me: :rainbowkiss:
Celestia: "If I said yes, would you take the job?"
Character: "Consider it done! "
Me: :rainbowlaugh:

I want his job.

OK. Just reread the whole story. This is to good to leave the odd error in it so here goes.

In the first several chapters you have (i ) rather than , not major but rather jarring, everything is

going along fine when i hit one of them, see what I mean.

You also seem to hit the caps key at random intervals whether or (Not ) you need to.

There are also a few spots where you don't hit the caps key and you should have, Twilights name and so forth

I only hit one spelling error. Don't use this as a standard, if it wasn’t for spell check I would be

lost. Anyway you have ( incredulasly ) instead of [ incredulously ] at the end of chapter seven.

love the story can't wait for more.

2416863 Ahhh right, right... thanks for the input :D I'll go over that now :D

I re-read and have reached a decision.

This fic NEEDS a 'Lutece' moment.
If you don't know who the Luteces are, play Bioshock: infinite.
Too lazy or can't afford it, Youtube them.

2424530 *looks it up* I'm liking this Idea :D :scootangel:

2427246 I'm contemplating a hangover chapter (3 parter) further down the line... :P scary thought... i have plans... :pinkiehappy:

I still think a Lutece moment would add a decent amount of random and funny.

2510978 oh, thanks for the reminder, I've been all of the place recently, what with my dad being in hospital n all... But I'll be getting back into the swing of things soon :) :pinkiehappy: Keep those peepers peeled.

2609527 I'm still figuring out where to take him next Xd hopefully the next chapter will be done soon ;)

:rainbowlaugh:
That... is the best ending... ever... of all time.
:rainbowlaugh:

"It's Pinkie Pie all over again"

Love it though I was expecting she'd compare it to when Discord also basically said "Where's the fun in making sense?"

This was a hilarious and great chapter, can't wait for more.

As excellent as this chapter is, why does it feel...lacking?
Did you just write this as a filler?

2846218 basically yeah... I'm still gathering Idea's for it, now that Discorded Humanity is finished...

2912611
*Shrugs*
I kinda thought that Twilight had a thing for him so she's jealous.
Course, being confused doesn't really prove that... -_-
And the comment was almost two weeks ago too...

2912748 haha, I see...well the tale still needs a good fleshing out... but I already know how this is gonna go XD

and I've made a start on something new.

2913891
Really now?
I'm intrigued, what is this new project that you have started?

2914951 it called "Heaven's hung in black"

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