Blueberry Bass wasnt always depressed and repressed and what ever other -essed word you could think of...
he was once a small colt with a dream, and a girl next door to cheer him up....
but circumstances change...
Ponies die...
and Journies are made...
and love grows from a small seed of self-loathing.
the first four chapters are just setting it up...
and then, our tale truly begins.
A-a little different, but I like it.
215108 eh, Romance... its all im actually good at writing... for a guy, thats pretty damn embarassing
D'awwww
This is really cute. Nice job
I don't know Gimli. I enjoyed it. Wouldn't mind knowing a little bit more about Bass, but all in all I enjoyed it. Plus I was able to finish my sandwich as it ended.
Also, don't be ashamed of romance, Be ashamed of mutilation. Seriously romance is happy, you can feel for the character, you can embrace the flaws and quirks that makes every kiss stand out just that much more in your memory.
Never, EVER doubt the power a good romance can have. You can change the hearts and minds of more people with a well written ballad then with a blade.
215157 i see your point (you mentioned a blade and i went with it) if i get inspired enough... this may get expanded
215177 "don't be ashamed of romance, Be ashamed of mutilation." Thats the point, dont do cupcakes. Do pinkie. In multiple senses.
215192 .... giggety
215206 EEEEGSACTLY!
Kinky
This was really sweet! A little rough and confusing to read at some points, but I generally enjoyed it.
I agree that having more background information about Bass is preferable. I think his character meshes well with Pinkie in a very interesting way!
Also, it mentions Pinkie's eyes as being magenta? Her eyes are blue. Haha.
Daaaw that was so cute I hope to see more I defenatly want to know more about bass
215534 whoops
Growing up does suck dude.....
aww poor bass growing up does indeed suck
Pinkie is watching Blueberry Bass....STALKER! Nah jk
good song choice The story is really good the only thing that bothers me is the chpaters are so short but then again they have me wanting more so its a good thing right?
260802 i suppose so
Wow....Bluebass is treated like a BITCH and they don't even let him explain ANYTHING!]
WTF Mane 6, I know that it must be hard, but come on.,
273813 Dude... theres one i never mentioned...
WHO COULD HAVE DONE THIS?!?!?
Yeah, Fluttershy is a BAWS with the stare, and Rainbow was acting like a bitch for jumping to conclusions so fast. Guess its not her fault thought, the thing lead to Bluebass.
Fluttershy is a BOSS i hope pinkies alright
275256 find out on the next exiting episode of ...FAPP!!!
2 Weeks......CHEEZUS!!!!!
wow 2 weeks
I think you'd get a lot more praise if you just spent 15 minutes or so correcting capitalization alone. Good story though!
281187 oh.. thanks for pointing that out
good song choice?
The idea is very interesting, if you spent more time fixing your spelling, capitalization, formatting, and style you'd have many more thumbs... Anyhow, I honestly wish you'd continue this. If you'd like more help in revising you can ask me or pretty much anypony else here.
307112 thing is ... the computer needs repairing... and it will be continued
A lot of emotion in this chapter I like it very powerful and good song choice
794522 took long enough