Silver Spoon is a very odd filly who seemingly knows no fear. With bizarre behavior such as hers, what will she do if she comes face to..."face" with Slenderpony? The most feared Entity in Equestria?
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Kind of bizarre, but still good. I enjoyed your take on Silver Spoon's mindset and characterization.
I'd drop the "come at me, bro," though. It jars the scene and ruins the tension.
Not a bad story, though really hard to read, be sure to seprate when others speak and your paragraphs, make sure to double check your work. Impressive though, her walking around as the Grim Reaper in a hosiptal was bucked up but funny as hell, I enjoy your take on Silver Spoon, and not bad at all though....be sure to seriously work on it
Kinda wut-ish, but very well-written. I enjoyed this.
I am so confuzzled.
2067889 Please tell me what confuzzles you. I am relatively new to publishing and would appreciate any input.
Good thoughts-Now I loved the idea, Silver Spoon leaving her group, though I might love (No not that way) her and the idea of Slenderpony (Slendermane,) it always boggled in my head what would happen? What would happen to Silver Spoon, this is kind of a good way of explanation, she would leave her fate on the choices of Slenderpony either she dies or not it's up to the monster. I loved your take on Silver Spoon's true self, a straight "A" student mislead by Diamond Tiara, this is perfect for those such as myself which prefer her over Diamond Tiara.
The fact you wanted to make this seem like a redemption for Silver Spoon is great and it shows really well.
Bad thoughts- I to be honest wish I could go without saying a few bad things, however as all stories go there are flaws. You see with your writing I found it started to lack details, not too noticeable though. With everything that went on compared to the good thoughts you are goin quite well.
Overall-Overall I give it eight Mustaches
out of ten 
Note-The colored text is part of the blog called "Shadowbolts takeover" just to let you know.
2914062 Thank you for the insight. I will work on relevant details in my upcoming work. This was one of my first stories and I am proud to say I improved since then. Glad to see you're looking at my work.
2914118 Hey no problem.
I love you quirky Silver Spoon.
Such a refreshing perspective on her personality. Being odd may have saved her life, in much the same way as the strange things Pinkie did to save the day against the parasprites.
The way Silver Spoon taunted Slender reminded me of when I was younger and would curse and call out thunderstorms, daring them to do their worst. I guess it made me feel brave when I was really just a coward
3482293 Hi!
5542840 well hello my young little quadruped counterpart.
<3
5543556 Hello! I assume everything is going well with you. You seem nice.
5543659 Why thank you dear. But the writer probably doesn't want us to like, take up the comments in discussion. So I will answer your other message. Oh and you seem quite pleasant your self btw