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Well, alright so far. You'll need to touch up on the grammar a bit, but apart from that, it's fine.
Appleloosa
2011980
Of all the corrections that need to be made, that's the one you go for?
Start with the first sentence:
And fixed:
2012040
I already pick on grammar too much, but that's more of a 'ponyspeak' mistake, so I thought I'd help you out there, and just say that you has bad grammar.
who ise her mother? fluttershy?