"'Descent into madness' implies you went unwillingly." College student, stupidly into gaming, voice actor hopeful.
Stop me if you've heard this one; a brony wakes up as a pony in Equestria. Stick with me, there's more to this...
I woke up as an alicorn and, within minutes was captured by a troop of ponies and tossed into an internment camp along with many others like me; bronies turned into alicorns. The events that followed would show me a truth I would have never expected.
My name is Creed, and I'm now an alicorn in Equestria. Living the dream, I guess...
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sound like the alicorns are marines for a war. that is what i think anyway
This really needs more attention, such a unique and [imho] well written story deserves more than 11 views, steriotypes for alicorn ocs be damned.
Im liking where this is going.
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But seriously, it means a lot.
Good sir, you have any attention with this.
last time a man put a group of people in a camp it didn't end well. He ended up committing suicide, his country a shit hole, his army destroyed, his people-slaughtered. Learn from our fucked up history, so we may fuck up those who wrong us first.
die opresso liber
12 likes already? I'm so jelly right now. Well done.
I felt like giving some short speech about freedom in latin, but then I thought about candy and now i wont do it.
and by the by, is it so that celestia's at fault for this happening to the bronies/pegasisters? Is she the mastermind behind it all?
I got excited when I saw a new chapter to read this afternoon!
I'm really enjoying this fic and I think you're doing a great job with it! Keep up the good work and God Bless!
So, all the alicorns are Bronies, correct? And since there are a ton of them.... does this mean that everyone who was ever a Brony is now an alicorn in Equestria?!?!?
My reaction is: 
"So Awesome!"
YEHS NEW CHAPTAH
naw but really, I'm liking this story quite a bit.
Keep up the good work, author c:
*Insert "This Gon Be Gud" meme here*
yay new chapter
c:
All bronies to arms!!!
CRUSH! KILL! DESTROY! SWAG!
Sweet Celestia please don't tell me Discord is behind this
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i don't think Discord would do something like this... Oh wait, my bad.
He would exactly do something like this.
Sir Hammerock
Borderlands 2
Again, I didn't see that one coming! You, sir, are good!
What a twist...
Please tell you haven't used the Humans Are bastard trope, seriously I'm really getting sick of encountering this damn trope so I hope you have a really good explanation or can tell that I am misinterpreting this somehow.
did not see that coming indeed 5/5 twilight smiles for the plot twist
Great new chapter! Good to see a flashback that Creed has. Oh, and by the way, please give Pete my condolences for the awkward situation he was placed in.
aw hell....mannnnn.
Oh boy...... I did not see ANY of that coming.
honestly?
I think that the bad guys are a bit too op.
Like, way too op.
not hatin' or anything just sayin.... op.... y'know.
How did they get royal guard armo- they probably beat up some guards for that
BUT
wouldn't creed 'n lily have like SAID SOMETHING TO THE GUARDS AND SHIT
ABOUT HOW THEIR STALKERS LOOK LIKE
WOULDN'T TWILIGHT SOMEHOW HAVE LIKE DONE SOMETHING
OR SOMETHING
AND i should stop using capslock so much :/
SHIT LIKE THAT
YEAH!
HAHA very well thought out ending
but wait plot twist
(the alicorns are freed but Luna and Celestia do not want them there.)
I love this concept already! Can’t wait to see how this storyline unfolds.