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I will wait Nd see how you intend to pull his off. Won't lie I'm looking foward to the clop.

Mature tag... sex tag... first 5k words a very interesting buildup for a good story. I like it :pinkiehappy:

my reaction for nsfw fanfic (clopfic) with NMM (uber rare stories) = yay
my reaction when I saw what this fic will contain = oh come on....

Trigger warning(s); this fic contains:
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Futanari
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ugh :/ people more and more are forgetting about things like strap-on dildos, rule63, magic tentacles or even the fact that whole palace is filled with MALE guards. futa is so easy and lazy mode: attach gigantic dick to female and hoooray orgy/fucking/rape time ~~~

why does it say this story is complete? it's not even a clop yet but it says it's complete

Can't wait for the cloppy bits.

2004475
It's his /her story to write. If you don't share those interests don't whine and complain.

2004475

I don't like futa either, but I have respect those those that do. Just because someone uses it, doesn't mean they did it to be lazy.

2004475
So because the author is writing about something you don't like, it's "lazy" ?

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Regular updates. I love you so much.

i really like how this chapter turned out

Very nice. But I don't think Nightmare would almost apologize to Celestia. Luna yes, but not Celestia. But this is your story so I won't tell you to change it.

good to see a different take on nightmare moon nice work

this story is appealing to me in every way i can think of!

You sir/madame, deserve a medal/internet.

Oooookaaayyyy. What the HELL did I just read? That was interesting to say the least.

WOAH!!!!!! I never thought Celestia would allow Nightmare to do that. Nor would I imagine Nightmare WANTING to do Celestia. WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!

2033586a thousand years on the moon can really help you develop you're sexual fantasies.:twilightsmile:

2004475
enjoying Futanari is a fetish just like tentacles or toys. i would be bored reading a strapon fic, REALLY bored. its not forgetting about strapons its a preference. i like tentacles though, perhaps more than Futa... hmmn. what if Futa AND tentacles? :pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

Actually I liked it:twilightsmile: nice for a clop fic to actually contain some story :D

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Assumedly, yes. I'd hate to write something like, 'Luna got up from her desk and trotted down the hallway to her bathroom,' Every time a couple hours or so passed. They're magical horses anyways, so they don't necessarily need to use it as often as a Human would, if even at all. Just super saiyan.

Dis is b00tif00l
:pinkiesmile:
I lurv u br0

This would explain Luna Eclipsed and the transformation Luna did near the end.

:unsuresweetie: I really like your mane!
I'm sorry but I had to, it was too easy.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

All I can say is that you need to write another story like this. Like Celestia sending over a whole cake for each of the Mane 6 at a sleepover when Spike is gone. Oh, the wonders they could pursue....

brilliant use of Latin as a ancient tongue I really liked your story and i would love to here more of this

Why hasn't this been in the feature box yet?

Huh, I wanted a Nightmare moon clopfic and that's what I found, good work for your first time. Though no offense, I think this whole solution to the problem coming from Inky was kinda bullshit.

ok, I felt my heart jump start from the Awww moment. :heart::ajsmug:

2033508 sir, what you just read was someone cosplaying as a Pegasus and had hard rouch kinky sex with and Earth pony. With that said hopefully that clarifies and confusion if not, just do what most would do in that situation and just say, "Fuck it." and yes, I'm using that for a pun as well, enjoy :trollestia:

wow... just... no words can be said to truly fit the bill in this situation... :trollestia:

kinky and depressing... I think any form of a me gusta died when Nightmare Moon disappeared...

Bravo and well done!

Upvoted solely because of the phrase 'tummy titties'.

That made me laugh for a good minute. :rainbowlaugh:

>tummy titties

Welp, this gets my upvote.

Tummy titties... That is the newest teletubby... also upvote.

yeah i agree....

I'd like to add this to the Somnophilia group, but it's a lengthy story, so I'm not sure which folders to add it to. Would you like to add it, or point me to which chapter has the somnophilia content?

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Because why not?!?!

P.S.S. I reread this at least ten times over the course of a couple months, and I just barely had the balls to post it. It feels so mechanical and choppy… ugh, emotions suck… why do I have to give such a huge shit about what anonymous people think of what I wrote?

that should be P.P.S
you're wanting to write 'Please Please See'
not 'Please See See'
you silly person.

This chapter is very hard to read. The double spaced paragraphs are screwing up the pacing of the story, plus some paragraphs have no spaces at all.

“By the Gods, I swear I will end you! Right here and right –” The princess was cut short when Nightmare Moon arched her neck to place a quick kiss on her unprepared lips. Luna’s face turned bright crimson in a blush as the taste of cake and Nightmare Moon graced her. She pulled backwards, sitting upright on her haunches with her hooves covering her face.
Nightmare extended her hoof towards the cobalt blue mare. “Luna, I –“
“Shut up. You are not sorry.”



A crease formed between Nightmare’s brows as she pulled her hoof back. The look on her face appeared as if she had just been slapped. “But I just wanted –“



“I said, ‘shut up’!”

I prefer Nightmare and Luna to Nightmare and Celestia. Personal hate aside. There are just things I look for in a ship that I don't see with them.

2018101
I agree as well. With both statements.

2020640
Me as well. Minus the Celestia part I read in the summary. Good length, few grammatical errors, good plot, in more than one way, and isn't rushed

Shame. I really like Nightmare Moon

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