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Shrinky Frod


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dont know why it has 3 thumbs down, i like it so far, it's original :twilightsmile: just wondering were this is going is making me fave it and awaiting your next update :pinkiehappy: quick question, is there going to be some more bondage roleplay? perhaps a gag?

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Honestly, my only question about the dislikes is why they won't fill me in on what they didn't care for. I won't break people!

As for more kink... almost certainly, though it'll depend on what I get for prompts to play with too. Or plot bunnies from the muses between prompts.

yes please do more :pinkiehappy:

I loved it
Dom/sub clop is like catnip to me:pinkiehappy:

Try not to read too much into the thumbs-down. Many people will downvote based on the cover art, the description, or even the tags without even bothering to read or leave a comment. Some people are just vindictive like that. I rather liked this story, and eagerly await to see where you taker it, and whether or not any others get involved in this. :raritywink:

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Oh, I know. It's just my little finger to the haters, as t'were. "If you dislike it enough to say you don't like it, tell me why... assuming you actually have a coherent reason and aren't just being a big ol' Gilda." :pinkiehappy: That said, particular things that are or aren't liked (y'know, constructive criticism and all that) are appreciated!

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Here kitty kitty.... :duck:

There will be more, I'm sure - I'm already starting to think over the next prompt, since it fits our little trio here fairly well, actually. Though it may be less to-the-point cloppy....

I just have to stop listening to the corgi with the horribly soap-opera ideas he's trying to make me write. :ajbemused:

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No. I just have to remember not to fall victim to the power of his mind.

I love the dynamic you have going here for these three. You captured the competitive nature of RD and AJ perfectly and having Mistress Rarity upping the game was a perfect :twistnerd:. I can't wait to see more of this and keep up the good work! Liked, faved, and watched :twilightsmile:

I vote for smut.

Write it out, you would not be the first to use the prompts but ignore the time limit.

Can't go wrong with more smut. :twilightblush:

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Y'all are a buncha filthy enablers!:ajbemused:

And I love ya for it! :rainbowkiss:

I'll see what I can do. :raritywink:

to Smut or not to Smut, that is the question, I say Smut all the way baby :D

More smut wooh!

And I'm secretly very happy that Rainbow was with AJ before Rarity :)
RariJack ticks me off while RariJackDash is hot:rainbowwild:

I've seen a marine get ripped in half and bleed to death but this is just awful I just can't describe what I feel

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Really? I'd thought I'd have to work a lot harder to beat the bisection of your fellow man! I must be better than I thought! :trollestia:

Can we have the smut and the next prompt? :ajsmug: :rainbowkiss: :duck:

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Weeeeell, I ended up missing a prompt due to a 'whoops' in the announcement, but I've got some plans.

As for the smut, it's in the works.

Not really a fan of DiscoShy (smut) and I hoped that it was the extra smut of chapter 2:pinkiehappy:

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Heh - don't worry, that's on the way, though I'll probably edit it onto the end of Chapter 2 rather than creating a new chapter.

And while Discord will be involved with Flutters' love life, he's *so* not the submissive sort 99 times out of 100. Fluttershy just knows how to play him. :yay:

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It's not the submissive stuff that erks me, hell, I love that kinda stoff.
It's just Discord, and his mishmash of body parts

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Don't worry, I know what you meant. Just saying it wasn't going to be a recurring couple.

Before I read the extra chapter, only 900 words? I now know that the clop is gonna feel tacked on. I will read and enjoy it regardless but yeah...

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Sorry; I'll be the first to admit that it's not necessarily my best work, though this time I think it's compounded by being sick and writing it when I really should have been headed to bed.

Of course, the fact that it's part 2 of the piece also means that most of what was supposed to happen in the scene with done, so it really was raw cloppage. :pinkiehappy: All the same, I suspect that even most of my clop is going to remain clop-lite, character-focused. It seems to be where my strengths lie.

Nicely done. I was wondering when the futa-ponies would rear their heads. Say, do you mind if I borrow that herd-wife term for my stories? It fits a lot better than what I was thinking of using (which was nothing). :twilightsmile:

Also:

I’d just love to see what happens when you’re both[ trying to blow my mind….”

You have and extra bracket there after "both".

So.. The next one is fluttershy and discord right?

Actually, no, though I will be coming back to Fluttershy's unusual love life. Which Discord plays a role in... just not that role.

It's not bad even though I heavily prefer AppleDash and RariJackDash:pinkiehappy:

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Feel free to borrow it! :D

One of these days I should lay out my thoughts on poly-ponies....

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I'd love to hear your thoughts on them. And thanks for the use of the term. Although there's really no stopping anyone from just using it, I like to get permission as a professional (heh) courtesy. Good chappie, by the by. I honestly never thought of this, er, pairing, but I could see it happening, and wouldn't mind seeing more of it. I'm going to assume that OTT stands for one true trio. :twilightsmile:

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Gah. I hate to go fanboy, but it's just Ein. German for "One". Meaning he's the only Welsh Corgi left.
Sorry. I love Cowboy Bebop, and I love Corgis even more.

I love how you brought out the competitive natures and tomboy-ish characters of RD and AJ.
Being a massive Rarity fan, I pictured myself watching through the window, Animal House style.
Excellent delivery on all the sensual descriptions too. Bravo. :moustache:

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Huh. I thought it was because he was supposed to be some sort of genius dog, or had a cyber brain or something. Ah well, That' what I get for using information gained through osmosis rather than watching. Incidentally, I always thought Einstein was a funny name. "one stone" heh. :ajsmug:

That was good, damn good. That kind of relationship between Pinkie and the Cakes makes sense, in a kind of odd way but still works.

Was actually thinking of submitting this one, but wasn't sure if it would be appropriate.
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Indeed, I'll have to make some time to read this when I finish off the next chapter of my own :raritystarry::applejackconfused::rainbowwild: fic. :D

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I like RariJackDash but only as a clop aspect. I don't like it enough to actually join a group about it.
I still detest RariJack but Donny's boy did write one romantic story about RariJackDash that I liked

Usually I dislike it when authors use anything but 'red' as a safeword, but 'polyester' as Rare's safeword is fucking inspired. You get one billion points for emphasising that tops safeword too, and a billion more for pointing out that berating someone for safewording is a serious faux pas. Definitely one for the faves list.

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Heh - I actually base how safewords work on my own system. Green, yellow/orange, red, and safeword.

Green: Go right ahead, babe, I'm okay now.
Yellow/orange: Slow down/do something else please, I'm not quite comfortable with this.
Red: Stop, this doesn't feel right, I'm not comfortable.
Safeword: This should be something that's specific to the pony in question ("polyester," for example, for Rarity. Rainbow's and AJ's haven't come up yet, though I know what Rainbow's is at least.) However, when the safeword is used, it basically means "stop, right now, we need to talk about this, and if you keep going it is without my consent."

Comment posted by Little_Draco deleted Mar 23rd, 2013

When you have this done to yourself... you sometimes forget how close to death you can get and how awesome it feels... but safewords are a bitch to remember... especially if you are being chocked.:raritywink: But yeah seriously dont do this.... being near death gets boring and stupid after a while....:pinkiehappy:

God damn I love this fic. Awesome descriptions of polyamory, burningly hot clop scenes, Angel banging Fluttershy — it's got everything I could ask for.

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Thank you! That means a lot coming from you. :)

And yeah, plot is gonna be rearing its finely shaped head more and more as I get to the prompts that, for one reason or another, I couldn't touch for SMP. Just wait until Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow hit *their* plot complication....

I remember that cartoon about a guy trying to get rich with a singing frog. Dang thing would never sing when other people were watching:twilightangry2:

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