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Shrinky Frod


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Pinkie's on her way back from Canterlot with all the others after Discord's defeat - and she suddenly realizes that there's something very, very important she needs to fix when she gets home.

Assuming she still has one, that is.

Starring: Pinkie Pie and the Cake Family

(Rated Teen for languages and ponies in alternative relationships.)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 17 )

I like it a lot! But you already know that. ;) Interested in what comes later.

Hmm... whoever it was that dropped that .5 rating in there, don't suppose you'd mind telling me what you thought was so horrible about the story? Can't improve without a little feedback, after all.

This was weird. The idée that Pinkie and the Cakes would be in that kin of relationship is strange but humuroes at the same time.
However, I am glad that somepony finally decided to write Pinkies fear of making others sad in a good way.

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Strange, perhaps, but it just seemed to make sense to me, once I thought of it, more than probably any other pairing I've seen Pinkie put into.

Glad you liked the story though! I am a little curious about what you mean about "writing Pinkie's fear of making others sad in a good way," though.

Aw, I love it. And Pinkie's relationship with Cakes makes weird sense.

I was expecting a bit more story than this, but it's a nice enough little tale. Little being the operative word here, but it doesn't outstay its welcome.

What you've posted so far is well written and interesting.
I love crack pairings ever so much.
Though I guess this isn't technically a "pairing".
Looking forward to more.

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Well, I've decided that *this* story is probably done.

Doesn't mean that Pinkie and the Cakes won't be showing up another time or three in other things I'm working on though. ;) Who knows - maybe they'll come back with vacation stories, or any number of other fun little situations to be wound up in. :pinkiehappy:

my heart beats like an untamed sweet
while you are near, too sweet to bear
I hold you close, smell your lust
feel your breath, slow and deep
you are indeed my delectable treat


It just makes sense

that was beautiful man, thank you

Well! That -is- an interesting take. You did a good job making it believable- and a very good job characterising everypony.

Kudos on a fic well-written! :twilightsmile:

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I don't see the way she acted when she got back as being scared of making people sad, I see it as her being horrified and sincerely sorry because of what she said.

Comment posted by dzonewolf deleted Mar 13th, 2016
Comment posted by dzonewolf deleted Mar 13th, 2016

There's tags for the cake couple, if you wanted to add 'em. I really like the idea of these three in a cute, polycule. It's a good Pinkie ship.

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Heh - yah, there are *now*.

Back in the day, not so much!

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Ikr imagine not using all the crazy new tags

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