It's sunset, and Applejack is enjoying the evening air at Sweet Apple Acres. Then, she spots a bay colt sneaking suspiciously around her trees, and investigates - and is plunged head first into the dangerous world of the Doctor.
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Tamar
I live in the UK, and have been at university in Devon since September 2011. My home is near London, and I first started watching My Little Pony in February 2011.
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The doctor lies...
More please?
I love Dr. Whooves
Do continue.
I say go with it! Ya got my attention throughout the story and that's a good sign. However, you could be a bit more descriptive. I had trouble envisioning your monster. But overall, well done!
Moar
More please, AJ needs some adventure too.
I loved it! A bit shorter and less mind-blowing then I prefer my Doctor Whooves adventures. But y'know the saying, if you only ever eat one food... That being said I really enjoyed this. Hopefully there will be more.
151924
not nessisarally. he just does not tell the full truth.
and as doctor whoof is 10. ten only lies when he has to. and he had no reason to.
This is a GREAT story!
You should post/write more! (Please! Or else I will
)
interesting more would be nice
I'm pretty sure Sweet Apple Acres is private property; why did you say it wasn't?
Pretty good demonstration of the Doctor's methods, though!
Great story! My only complain is that you didn't "type" out Applejack's accent!
Otherwise a top notch story! My stars, I gib dem to you!
Bravo bravo.
I vote for more. This would be a perfect first episode for a MLP version of Doctor Who.
152163 I guess I just thought in an open and trusting place like Ponyville it would be
some of the farms near where I come from are open for people to walk through.
Glad you liked it though!
i liked this Doctor Whooves adventure i'd love to see more
I shall summarize:
This is good
I want more
Please make more
More. Now.
normally i try not to force an artiest but ya gotta make more
Please write more. Please.
*Ahem* Moar???
more please, my good sir
MOAR!!!!!
More please
This is AWESOME!!! Make another chapter please!
Doctor: "Hey I'm back!"
Applejack: -silence-
Doctor: "How long have I been gone?"
Applejack: -silence-
Doctor: -awkwardly walks off-
Applejack: