(One-shot)
"Feelings are irrelevant."
(Image is by WakerofWinds)
In another Equestria, the white changeling of the Nothing led the forces of said inexistance to destroy and erase everything. Unfortunately, it knew that it would be defeated, so it left that world for a fresh one. One that it would not be known in. One free from the knowledge of the Nothing's imminent arrival.
Its power is immense, and, being a creature from the Nothing, it is emotionless and cruel. Its body has changed to give it a taller and more royal appearance, one to which changelings would obey. It fled to the Sirian Jungles north-west of Equestria to make a hive of its own. Has it been succesful? What exactly is its newly appointed mission? And why does it feel pain whenever it sees Chrysalis? Why is it in its chest too? Why not elsewhere?
Ok im positively confused.
Complete, comedy tag, pokemon music?
Srsly
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1997170 It's a one-shot. I like to do one-shots before going to the main story currently. It'll eventually subside and something new will arise.
1997231
Good luck i will pass
1997240 Why?Not ready for some form of romance going to Chrysalis? Don't forget that this creature, from base, has no feelings. Imagine the situations that could happen.
1997244
After like 20 or 30 stories like that, sorry it's nothing new :p And only few of them truly show how it's "different" rest was just practically same scenario.
1997259 Well, I understand what you mean. If you knew me, though, you'd understand why some readers here like me alot. I tend to...do things to the typical scenario. I hate unoriginality, so that's why I like to take on "typical" things and add uniqueness to it. The story where this "changeling" comes from is another of my stories. It has "Destitute" in it. If you don't wanna read it just to know, the changeling there is a form of possessed creature, with the being in it coming from the Nothing, an entity of inexistance that came before all of creation and that considers existance as a tumor to remove. The changeling was part of that, but it was smarter than the rest, leading to this situation. It is also known as "The Unknown".
1997289
You know how bad that sound?
Like now i see just overpowered thing because he run from something "unbeatable" etc etc.
Dunno only because of your attitude im gonna read that and we will see :P
1997332 Oh. Don't worry. I NEVER do that sort of "mary-sue" thing. Come to think of it, I even made a satire of a mary-sue story. She was mary-sue-minated by the mary-sue-minators.
Also, the Nothing is affected tremendously by music. Try and figure out why?
1997341
But you see, even description gives totally opposite felling
1997351 Duh. That's because they are the Creator and the Destroyer, the second oldest beings in all existance. They NEVER intervene in the real world.
1997360
From fucking overpower to even more overpower ;p? Ok i will write what i think after reading this
1997366 Don't worry. If you want something to bother you, you should the story with Psycho's debut. The Illogic calls all. You cannot flee the World of Illogic.
That was... inconclusive...
1997458 Exactly.
1997375
Sadly after few chapter i just read it on strength. I will pass.
But you can throw your story to some groups for sure it will give you some readers
1997567 Which one?
1997739
Hmm dunno for start maybe those 2
Queen Chrysaliss changeling swarm
Queen Chrysaliss feeding grounds
I know names show something but pretty much they have few stories what don't have Chrysaliss at all just changelings.
1997760 N-no. I meant which story did you read? I just like to know the thoughts of others on my stories, even if they are unliked. I also usually don't advertise myself in other groups. It feels like SHAMELESS SELF-PROMOTION.
1997768
Shameless self promotion, but after that groups i know few very good stories ;p
About story it was Destitue.
1997778 Oh. Why not read "The true Psychopath" to alleviate your mind with some Illogic?
1997799
No thanks, if i want some "WTF" moment after i read i would read trollfics but i search for something what you read and "Wow damn i wanna more can't wait, can't sleep". Good example will be Changeling heart and the new moon
Or i'm wrong and you don't wanna make reader fell typical "WTF" ?
1997842I dunno. It's your choice whether you want to give it a try or not. Who do you think the guy in my profile pic is? He's my favorite character, so I adopted his name and gave him a proper story shortly afterwards.
1997866
BTW he look like big lollipop
1997883
This was a great one-shot. I hope it'll become a full story.
1997967 It will, obviously. I wouldn't leave such a heavy cliff-hanger out like that.
Hmmmm..... Intriguing....
Looks like a bunch of grubs in that heart.... or the corruption from Dead Space.
1998667 It's for the proper story that it'll try and understand them. After all, feelings are a sign of existance, so of course it'll brush them off as an annoyance. You don't want to keep on your shoulders what burdens you.
This story reminds me of this kid who goes to my school named Julien
not bad, not bad, one to keep in my favorites for if I'm wanting to read it again. make story?
2043902 The main reason for my one-shots is to suggest a future story, so yes. I am going to make one.
2045740 oh joy!!! Cant wait to see how it turns out.
2046890 The two will have some...creamy times.
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See?
2047123 oh,
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hm, i think that this needs more puns... who knows anymore?
2050149 So you want...funishment or pun-ishment?
Oh Amore tra un re e una regina!