The peaceful town of Ponyville is thrown into dismay at the news of one heroic pony's sacrifice.
Based on Thirty Minute Pony Prompt 230
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This work was based on Thirty Minute Pony Prompt 230, but was not submitted because it took way longer than 30 minutes. Please feel free to offer critique in a polite, constructive manner.
Well, there went my good mood. Now I'm depressed.
1983177 Why? Why would you do that to me? You wrote it, so I read it, but still... Why? (Not saying wasn't good, but...) This isn't in any continuity with your other stories, is it?
1983363 Naw, just a one-shot attempt at a prompt.
1983371 Wait... Celestia is allowed to go to Tartarus when she wants (Or so the ending of Suck dictates), is Luna banned from Elysium for some reason?
1983392 Well, the devil can't go to heaven, can she?
1983398 Didn't stop him in the Incarnations of Immortality series. And yes, she CAN go to heaven, just not physically. Well...
Yes physically, but not physi... You know what I mean!
You sir have received my one free read and like.
In case you were wondering, I read a story every day and like it regardless of it's contents. You just happened to be that guy today!
Pretty good story though.
That was heart-wrenching, just truly amazing.
Can't say I like how the story went, but it was a great read nonetheless. This sentence made me laugh: "...this angry, strong, angry, vicious, angry, unhinged, angry stallion..." I suppose "The good die first, and they whose hearts are dry as summer dust, burn to the socket" - William Wordsworth.
this story is one of 3 that made me cry... You are a literary god.
Pretty good. Honestly, though...
It was rather boring.
I understand it was one of the Thirty Minute Prompts, but still. It was just sort of... bleh. Still made me tear up though, you bastard.
This was a good story (especially for a 30min) but the formatting - the way the scenes were staged- took away from the emotional tear-jerking aspect of it.
Why did I read this? Why is it that all the fics I'v been reading are the kind that make me cry? I've just been reading the short ones that sound good, but somehow they are all beautiful and tragic.....
Once more, it's me from the Good Grammar Directory, and this one has also been approved. I'll point out two errors that I found...
It should be just one "Ponyville".
I believe an "and" could go between those two words.
However, those were still not enough to disqualify your story. This fic has been approved and added to our folders. :)
3364943 Again, thanks for the corrections. :)
Sad yes, but I didn't cry. Brought tears to my eyes, but none fell. 'Tis a curse that I must bear.