The sad tale of Spitfyre as she struggles through her a life changing day in her childhood, and beyond
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Enjoyable.
This is a very interesting backstory to Spitfire. It went on for as long as it needed to and stopped without me feeling like there was something missing. Characterization was good, though at parts it felt slightly rushed, it seemed that it had more to do with the focus of the story and less to do with rushed writing.
Although there were a few points were I was slightly confused I put most of the blame on my sleep deprived brain of mine.
Overall: Good short story. Enjoyable read. A few slightly confusing parts. Original story that I haven't yet read anywhere else.
However the only thing that truly irked
me was that spelt her name Spitfyre. 
I'm used to seeing her name spelt Spitfire, and it is spelt that way on the wiki too.
I don't think that the story suffered at all from it though, aside from the double take when I first saw it. So I guess it's all good.
(But please respond to this to tell me why you spelt it Spitfyre, I'm very curious to know why you spelt it that way.)
3750 thank you for your kind words as for the spelling of the name......well one night when i began this story (at like 4am in the morning) i figured no one REALLY knows how her name is spelled it doesn't tell us. so i figured LETS BE DIFFERENT and I spelled it Spitfyre.......until someone told me that the orginal spelling was correct.....and then it was just my laziness that refused to change it. THUS HER NAME IS SPITFYRE:
I really did cry at this. 5 stars,no doubt about that.
I wanted to get this up tonight, or else i think i would have never ended up posting it
, i have re-written the darned passage so many times. that being said i know there are some grammatical errors and let it be known that i and constantly going through and checking for them. Thank You so much for your time reading this and i hope you enjoy
M.
You, through the use of OC ponies - which I usually hate - are making me care about a BG pony that I've never given much thought to. Bravo. Now go write some more
You do know that the yellow and orange stuff that gives off heat and light is spelled 'Fire' and not 'Fyre'
Nice work! Keep it up!
Wasn't the first chapter of this submitted to EqD? Why didn't you ever update it?
NEVER MIND, YOU DID
IMA STUPID
This is ingenious! One of the best fics I read. Ever.
LOVE the pic! whered you get it?
If anyone wants the pic: spitfire_with_hair_down_by_johnjoseco‑d3jh5o1.jpg
I see you like Bruce Springsteen, possibly?
Enjoyed it :) Every chapter is at a pleasant length aswell. Don't forget to continue on it!! :O
m0ar?
im confused wats going on
Y IS IT CANCELLED
AWWWWWW YOU WERE SO CLOSE TO MAKING ME CRY