Way to kill time on Sunday. And I gotta say that even though I've been checking your profile every day during these three months, you decided to upload a new chapter when I least expected it. Well, school starts tomorrow so your timing was perfect.
Meh, never really liked neither of the princesses, but at least you picked the better one. I just prefer common folks. Now, aside from my crappy personal opinions concerning the characters of the show, it was nice to read. The portrayal was super, as well as the grammar(I did not spot mistakes) and it's good to know something about Orchid's past.
Twilight will most likely be the next victim, but my vote still goes to Derpy, and I'll be waiting for PL to continue.
exposition galore... not exactly the dynamic whore romp I anticipated... just lotsa monologue in a style of noir I can't take seriously seeing as its freakin ponyville than manehatten.
The nobles are without doubt the ones who commands most respect each other, even though it's true that they all hide a sinister glare or grin beneath that sadly transparent mask. The 'regular' ponies of Ponyville are no excuse either. As much as they seem so occupied with their daily lives and needs of work, they too hide much darkness within their hearts. I can't imagine finding a single pony... wait, scratch that; I just remembered that Fluttershy one...
The more I read this fic, the less Orchid seems to me as a prostitute, rather than a sin-eater; the ponies use her to indulge their inner darkness and perversions, and she carries with those, just to be reviled for.
3094883 every person's story is a unique one, even prostitutes. There is no general way to describe how someone's life on the street is without being subjective and sounding stereotypical. Orchid is unique, and she must be strong in order to survive in her world. Therefore she is forced to live with all of her experiences like nails on a whiteboard, irreversible damage and stains of mental disfiguring.
Way to kill time on Sunday. And I gotta say that even though I've been checking your profile every day during these three months, you decided to upload a new chapter when I least expected it. Well, school starts tomorrow so your timing was perfect.
Meh, never really liked neither of the princesses, but at least you picked the better one. I just prefer common folks. Now, aside from my crappy personal opinions concerning the characters of the show, it was nice to read. The portrayal was super, as well as the grammar(I did not spot mistakes) and it's good to know something about Orchid's past.
Twilight will most likely be the next victim, but my vote still goes to Derpy, and I'll be waiting for PL to continue.
Glad to have you back
exposition galore... not exactly the dynamic whore romp I anticipated... just lotsa monologue in a style of noir I can't take seriously seeing as its freakin ponyville than manehatten.
After Twilight, I think Rainbow Dash should be her next customer.
Awesome! There's an update and Twilight is next. This should be interesting.
More curious of how she is going to get rid of Spike for this 'meeting'.
Surprise she didn't rat out the corrupt cop, but maybe that will come later.
Hold the fucking phone. We need a chapter with Discord in it somehow. He doesn't have to be a client, but we need Discord somewhere
*brohoof* Good to see you again. This is one of my favourite chapters on this particular story :)
Twilight coming up next time? Can't wait!
oh boi, i smell a 3-some
The more I read this fic, the less Orchid seems to me as a prostitute, rather than a sin-eater; the ponies use her to indulge their inner darkness and perversions, and she carries with those, just to be reviled for.
3094883 every person's story is a unique one, even prostitutes. There is no general way to describe how someone's life on the street is without being subjective and sounding stereotypical. Orchid is unique, and she must be strong in order to survive in her world. Therefore she is forced to live with all of her experiences like nails on a whiteboard, irreversible damage and stains of mental disfiguring.