damn...I'm kinda hoping for a follow up for Spike, you know, just to make sure he doesn't actually pull that crap on Rarity. The naive little feller don't deserve to be in the dungeon cuz of his ignorance!
Anyways, as for the next customer, I nominate: TOM THE ROCK! Cuz he'll be 'rock hard...'
...I apologize for that. I'll go away forever now.
2086279>>2086277>>2085779>>2085565>>2085481>>2085408>>2085313 you and all the others have your votes noted. Yes, even Tom the rock.... but don't get any ideas
Hm, I've got a couple more ideas, so I'll just list some with a priority, so you can pick whatever fits best to your style and this story. 1. BDSM 2. Some Princess/Prince/Queen/Bunnyoverlord (Kings have to stay outside!) 3. Threesome 4. Breakfast in bed... yeah, I'm serious.
I also thought about Cheerilee doing some teacher-student role play, but I think that'll mess with your story, so I left that out.
So I read the first chapter and once again soul, it's as dark as a onyx heart. So I won't be reading spike because, well, disgusting. But I do have an idea for a character and a mighty fine character with that. Cause Orchid has already captured my heart and thous my empathy, though she'd properly not like that. I wish for her to be with Fluttershy, now I know that 76 comments and properly 76 suggestions, it's already been said. But I think a night with shy, quite, reserved Fluttershy could be a good brake for Orchid and a good time for character development. So here's hoping and worrying.
I liked the story, yes, but every time I saw the word "whorse" my enjoyment of it increased by a significant amount. It is thus hard for me to determine whether I liked the story as a whole because of it's pleasing use of standard mechanics and nice expression of what I know to be a clever idea of yours...or if I liked it because you got to bypass most of my editor/critical instincts by making me giggle at the word "whorse".
A whole piece of shit? More like a few hundred pieces of shit! ...Worth the wait though.
Three-way with Shining and Cadance.
Come on people. You know you want it.
chrsylas
I'm going to say snowflake xD
Simply because I'm sadistic :P
YEAAAAHHHHH!!!!
Upvote for interactive element. Strangely foreshadowing what I have planned, myself.
I'm going to enjoy reading this so much
Keep writing. Also gief Big Macintosh. Because that'd be funny as hell
I still say Cutie Mark Crusaders!
damn...I'm kinda hoping for a follow up for Spike, you know, just to make sure he doesn't actually pull that crap on Rarity. The naive little feller don't deserve to be in the dungeon cuz of his ignorance!
Anyways, as for the next customer, I nominate: TOM THE ROCK!
Cuz he'll be 'rock hard...'
...I apologize for that. I'll go away forever now.
Shining Armor
I said before and I'll say it again. Rainbow Dash and Applejack want a BDSM threesome...
or maybe AppleDashLight orgy... with BDSM.
Ya know come to think of it, I just want BDSM with RD in there someplace.
I say pip!! He's a freaking boss!!
Yes he is a young colt.
2086279>>2086277>>2085779>>2085565>>2085481>>2085408>>2085313 you and all the others have your votes noted. Yes, even Tom the rock.... but don't get any ideas
I vote the CMC. Or a Big Mac/AJ threesome; I could see them hiring a prostitute to do things they're afraid to do with anyone else.
Hm, I've got a couple more ideas, so I'll just list some with a priority, so you can pick whatever fits best to your style and this story.
1. BDSM
2. Some Princess/Prince/Queen/Bunnyoverlord (Kings have to stay outside!)
3. Threesome
4. Breakfast in bed... yeah, I'm serious.
I also thought about Cheerilee doing some teacher-student role play, but I think that'll mess with your story, so I left that out.
2088136 Ohh, sounds nice! Definitively a noted vote
2088901 I'll keep all those in mind. Thanks, luminous. Always good to hear from you
2089191
Just can't get enough of your stories :)
Good chapter, Hope Spike grows up a bit.
Hmmmm...
Ditzy seems lonley maybe you could fix that
Luna, please!
2088040
But i thought you asked for our ideas...
Awesome chapter and interesting part with Berry I vote for Cadence and Shining
2091039 I did. Thing is... how would Tom even contact Orchid? He's an inanimate object...
So I read the first chapter and once again soul, it's as dark as a onyx heart. So I won't be reading spike because, well, disgusting. But I do have an idea for a character and a mighty fine character with that. Cause Orchid has already captured my heart and thous my empathy, though she'd properly not like that. I wish for her to be with Fluttershy, now I know that 76 comments and properly 76 suggestions, it's already been said. But I think a night with shy, quite, reserved Fluttershy could be a good brake for Orchid and a good time for character development. So here's hoping and worrying.
Fillyfooler.
2100802 I share your thoughts about writing sex involving Spike. not my biggest interest to do that, but hey, I give the people what they want
Threesome with Shining Armour and Princess Cadence.
See, this is just not fair. I enjoyed it...but I can't help but feel that some of that enjoyment came from reading the word "whorse".
It's almost like you cheated.
2201081 a buh duh? Cheated? What do you mean?
2208551
I liked the story, yes, but every time I saw the word "whorse" my enjoyment of it increased by a significant amount. It is thus hard for me to determine whether I liked the story as a whole because of it's pleasing use of standard mechanics and nice expression of what I know to be a clever idea of yours...or if I liked it because you got to bypass most of my editor/critical instincts by making me giggle at the word "whorse".
Heh heh. "Whorse"
2209286 whorse is the obvious wordplay between horse and whore. Thus, it was inevitable that I had to use it