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XenoJohn


Just a weird smelly guy who writes stuff

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A new nightmare is rising.
And the elements are dead or insane because the 'Cupcake' event.
But Slendy and Pinkamena find each other

Slendermane battles her for revenge of what she took from him

What she took from him was somepony special to him. He'll never get it back.

But he will make sure pinkamena dies a slow, horrible, painful, death.

inspired by ask-pinkamena-tumblr
Heavily inspired by a old fic 'I would smile if I could'

Episode one of my new series called
Slender

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 61 )

Eh, I can see that this story has good potential, but I would be cautious, the first chapter is a little too similar to the story where Slender meets Scootaloo for me.

As Psyco Kid said, it is very similar to the other one. It is a good concept but the difference between this one and the other one is that this one is newer. The other one has not been updated for a long time.

this can be interesting so im gonna be sure to check it out the next update

... Moar? :twilightblush:
Haven't read a Slendermane fic yet, so far, so good.

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AND YOU WILL GET MORE!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
Maybe after school I'll work on chapter 2:pinkiesmile:

1940778
Well are you alright about that or you are not?:pinkiesmile:

1941648 :twilightoops: :facehoof: yet again you blow my mind! You are amazing, hope to see more because you one: gave slendy a more hu... ponanity side. Also two you gave Rainbow a father:pinkiehappy: and the story feels so right! Well done!

Rate: 9.9/10

I m still trying to figure what this has to do with cupcakes?

1950087 This is related to the strength of the elements against slendy. :pinkiehappy:

1950087 slendy being Rainbows dad and all :pinkiesmile:

1950124 so slender is still evil I thought he'd be good in this!

1950153 Well think it like this... he continues having his everlasting hunger... and it gets stronger the more he tries to reisit... see what I mean. He wants to be good but he is limited because of his creation purpose, to drain fear from the world one sole at a time. Anything else you want to know please just ask I will not bite.:pinkiecrazy:

1950175 are you a co author or just a really good reader?

1950187 I am a better reader then a writer it seems. :twilightblush:

1950087
Keep on reading until the official chapter one (that is not in the prologue)
Then you will figure why is this about slender and cupcakes.:twilightsmile:

Anything else...No?
Then I'm just going to go...

I'm so lonely D::applecry:
Forever alone face

I'll give you a piece of my moustache to keep you company

1950175
I love this comment:rainbowkiss:
(Well that sounded homo:twilightoops: And that sounded racist!:twilightoops:)

Comment posted by Nickedbrass deleted Jan 13th, 2013

WE NEED MOAR OF THEESE AWESOMENESS. WHEN WILL THE NEXT CHAPTER COME?

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I might do chapter 3 on monday or maybe saturday...:twilightsmile:
Depends on how much homework I get

I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I await for the next chapter.

2011511
Thanks!:pinkiehappy: glad you liked it!:pinkiehappy:
I will try to make the next chapter after school IF I don't have too much home work:twilightsmile:

awsome bro :pinkiehappy: cant wait for part 2

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Thanks!:pinkiehappy:

I'll try to do it when I have a lot of free time up on my hands...:twilightsmile:
But I will keep my word!:rainbowdetermined2:

But I think you guys can go through another round waiting.:twilightsmile:

:raritycry: he is going to go on a killing spree... Great story and akinen to de:pinkiesmile:tail good luck!

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Thank you!:pinkiehappy:

My fans are the best fans I ever had...:pinkiesad2:

I can't for him to just rip pinkies face off like birth please! I REGRET NOTHING!

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Don't worry you will get your wish...:pinkiecrazy:

But you just have to wait...:ajsleepy:

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But do you regret about how much you know your grammar?:ajsmug:

:pinkiegasp: inception!!!! He fought his per-say past self , an indestructable killing creature of pure fear. :rainbowkiss: slendy needs a helping hoof to keep him up. Everyone give him your hoofs. Help him over come his fear fore he will consume himself if he doesn't.

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OK EVERYPONY CHOP OF YOUR HOOFS TO HELP SLENDY!!!:flutterrage:

Or I'll kill youuuuuu...:pinkiecrazy:

Slender's other side: HI I'm your ass kicked side!

Slender:WHAT!?

Slender ass kicked side: I help you kill everything! Oh yeah and can we order pizza?

Slender::facehoof:

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Thx:pinkiehappy:

Did you read all of the chapters?:rainbowhuh:

But the story is on hiatus for now:ajsleepy:

But when I have enough time to add more chapters I'll do it!:pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

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don't worry I'll try to make more chapters:pinkiehappy:

I just have a LOT of homework:ajsleepy:

Homework is a bitch:ajsleepy:

a good slender!?that what i call badaces.

i like this and CURSE YOU SCHOOL!

I am so happy too see that this is no longer cancelled! Also it's alright that you cancelled it, just as long as you continue to write it.

3258717 I will...
I thought that no one will view it anymore...
But I just need to let my imagination on the keyboard and make a story...:pinkiesad2:

if I don't get many likes or favs on my fics I'll still write for the entertainment I give to you all!:pinkiehappy:

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Don't you worry I'll still be here to read your story's for the sheer reason your story's are really entertaining and really well thought out. Even if your grammar isn't the best but I eagerly await for any new chapters from you in the mean time, along with the entertainment.

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