Solitary confinement. An extreme measure used to control and tame the most violent of prisoners. Long term confinement is know to cause server psychological effects. So after a thousand years is it any surprise the prisoner isn't exactly... norm
well I'm going very AU here but I figure there's a good chance when they were first gaining their powers Celestia had ever reason to let it go to her head. Not in an overwhelming dictator way but she had a lot of arrogance and a sense of entitlement due to being, well, the ponies god. And it was probably natural to put down her sister without realizing what she was pushing her too. All because she felt this was how things were supposed to be. Whether I can continue to make sense of this mindset, (if I've even succeeded in the first place) remains to be seen
would love to know what it is that Luna wanted ( and hope it is positive and won't bring pain to Celestia) But I am glad Luna understood that it is not really worth it to gain the love of ponies that doesn't really care for her, hack even from twilight and the rest for the mare. If they truly want to help her, they would had forgiven her, guide her, remind her that she is free if not in person than in letter. But so far I am seeing only the doctor (or doctors willing to help but Luna only agree that only one can check up on her) and Celestia making an effort on wanting to help and make her better. Really glad right now that Luna knows that her "friends" are basically her personalities and she now have the knowledge as actual proof that Celestia mean what she said though she is confuse on what had happen.So that Luna can continue on walking forward to recovery. What I don't understand is that why Luna has fangs? Would be nice to know that Celestia woke up with their hooves together Looking forward for the next update
I just finished reading this in one go then thought to myself "ohgodwhy" because now I have to wait for the next chapter. It's just that good. There's nothing specific I can really pick out that really appealed to me, luna's mental state, the relationship dynamic between her and her sister, too many things to list really. So Instead I will simply say this, I approve.
thank you very much for your comments guys damn so nervous to check them but im like they don;t hate it! Little Q & A, Luna having fangs is a little embellishment on my part. Figured that being possessed for several hundred years would leave some side effects on Lunas body, plus it was a way to make her even more scary and intimidating to the ponies. On the outside at least But anyway thankies again :)
2737042 felt amazing doesn't it? to be indifferent in the beginning to angry than sad (crying and heartbroken in my part) than happy again than sad all over again in such a short time
This is fantastic! I'm really glad that somwone has finally written a story about this and you have done a very good job so far. I think that you've done a great job showing how someone would act after that 1000 year isolation and any grammar/syntax errors really don't detract from the story (although I have seen quite a few). I am definitely looking forward to seeing more Keep up the awesome work!
sorry guys for the long wait. i am working on the next chapter promise. just work and life are conspiring to make it difficult can't set a date but its almost done.
Luna swallowed and mulled this over before she grinned evilly, “Do the ponies of equestria still know the legend of Trollestia?”
This. Right here. That just sealed my thoughts on how this story ends, and i'm ecstatic for it. I know it won't end exactly the same way i'm currently thinking, but the ending's general feeling will be the same.
Just found this last night. My curiosity's been piqued, Caleb. Faved, thumbed, tracked.
If you want anyone to look over your stuff before you post it I wouldn't mind doing it. I really like what you're doing here with the sisters' relationship (though I hope it doesn't go the incest route) and Luna's behavior is very believable. This is the kind of really dark AU I like.
I can't help but consider this story a guilty pleasure. It's relatively predictable, riddled with errors, and the emotional content tends to be melodramatic. Overall, I'd call the writing juvenile.
Seriously? Luna had to bow to Celestia when in court?
well I'm going very AU here but I figure there's a good chance when they were first gaining their powers Celestia had ever reason to let it go to her head. Not in an overwhelming dictator way but she had a lot of arrogance and a sense of entitlement due to being, well, the ponies god. And it was probably natural to put down her sister without realizing what she was pushing her too. All because she felt this was how things were supposed to be.
Whether I can continue to make sense of this mindset, (if I've even succeeded in the first place) remains to be seen
would love to know what it is that Luna wanted ( and hope it is positive and won't bring pain to Celestia)
But I am glad Luna understood that it is not really worth it to gain the love of ponies that doesn't really care for her, hack even from twilight and the rest for the mare.
If they truly want to help her, they would had forgiven her, guide her, remind her that she is free if not in person than in letter. But so far I am seeing only the doctor (or doctors willing to help but Luna only agree that only one can check up on her) and Celestia making an effort on wanting to help and make her better.
Really glad right now that Luna knows that her "friends" are basically her personalities and she now have the knowledge as actual proof that Celestia mean what she said though she is confuse on what had happen.So that Luna can continue on walking forward to recovery.
What I don't understand is that why Luna has fangs?
Would be nice to know that Celestia woke up with their hooves together
Looking forward for the next update
I just finished reading this in one go then thought to myself "ohgodwhy" because now I have to wait for the next chapter. It's just that good.
There's nothing specific I can really pick out that really appealed to me, luna's mental state, the relationship dynamic between her and her sister, too many things to list really. So Instead I will simply say this, I approve.
thank you very much for your comments guys damn so nervous to check them but im like they don;t hate it!
Little Q & A, Luna having fangs is a little embellishment on my part. Figured that being possessed for several hundred years would leave some side effects on Lunas body, plus it was a way to make her even more scary and intimidating to the ponies. On the outside at least
But anyway thankies again :)
2737042 felt amazing doesn't it?
to be indifferent in the beginning to angry than sad (crying and heartbroken in my part) than happy again than sad all over again in such a short time
I miss Twilight
Great story, pretty well-written.
Yes, your grammar is improving, but a proofreader probably wouldn't hurt
Not bad.I wish Luna will be fine. Waiting next update!
Update?
Love it! I hope this has a happy ending.
This is fantastic! I'm really glad that somwone has finally written a story about this and you have done a very good job so far. I think that you've done a great job showing how someone would act after that 1000 year isolation and any grammar/syntax errors really don't detract from the story (although I have seen quite a few). I am definitely looking forward to seeing more
Keep up the awesome work!
Update?
sorry guys for the long wait. i am working on the next chapter promise. just work and life are conspiring to make it difficult can't set a date but its almost done.
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sorry i check my work as best i can but always seem to miss stuff. hope the little grammar problems don't detract too much from the story
This. Right here. That just sealed my thoughts on how this story ends, and i'm ecstatic for it. I know it won't end exactly the same way i'm currently thinking, but the ending's general feeling will be the same.
Just found this last night. My curiosity's been piqued, Caleb. Faved, thumbed, tracked.
If you want anyone to look over your stuff before you post it I wouldn't mind doing it. I really like what you're doing here with the sisters' relationship (though I hope it doesn't go the incest route) and Luna's behavior is very believable. This is the kind of really dark AU I like.
I can't help but consider this story a guilty pleasure. It's relatively predictable, riddled with errors, and the emotional content tends to be melodramatic. Overall, I'd call the writing juvenile.
But I can't help but enjoy it, for some reason.