Solitary confinement. An extreme measure used to control and tame the most violent of prisoners. Long term confinement is know to cause server psychological effects. So after a thousand years is it any surprise the prisoner isn't exactly... norm
I could have done without the implied rape. However, that doesn't mean this wasn't fantastically well done. This could have been the fate of my version of Luna, who was separated from Nightmare Moon, and most of their shared power when Celestia used the Elements on her. Fortunately she ended up elsewhere.
I've always liked the solitary confinement approach when it comes to Luna's banishment. This is a good execution of that, though this chapter could do with a bit of grammar cleanup (also the chapter titles and description). Definitely following this.
Good, but it could use some editing to make it great. Paragraphs with linebreaks or indents, an editing pass or two to catch any of the punctuation errors that popped up.
It's still good enough to make me want to read more.
Lovely fic. Been really looking for one that could really contextualize the actual mental trauma that a banishment to the moon would have on Luna and I'd you've done it justice. This may be incorrect but I think the 'friends' Luna had were all really just psychological barriers she created to protect herself from madness with each of them being named after a facet of her personality with nightmare, of course, being the most dominant side that she tries but fails to fight off, especially with how you named them.
This is really interesting. You get a fave.
This was magical
I could have done without the implied rape. However, that doesn't mean this wasn't fantastically well done. This could have been the fate of my version of Luna, who was separated from Nightmare Moon, and most of their shared power when Celestia used the Elements on her. Fortunately she ended up elsewhere.
Bravo.
I've always liked the solitary confinement approach when it comes to Luna's banishment. This is a good execution of that, though this chapter could do with a bit of grammar cleanup (also the chapter titles and description). Definitely following this.
Ah a nice spot of darkness to balance out all the sweet I have been reading today.
Good, but it could use some editing to make it great. Paragraphs with linebreaks or indents, an editing pass or two to catch any of the punctuation errors that popped up.
It's still good enough to make me want to read more.
Lovely fic. Been really looking for one that could really contextualize the actual mental trauma that a banishment to the moon would have on Luna and I'd you've done it justice. This may be incorrect but I think the 'friends' Luna had were all really just psychological barriers she created to protect herself from madness with each of them being named after a facet of her personality with nightmare, of course, being the most dominant side that she tries but fails to fight off, especially with how you named them.