Excess magic use has numerous ways of backfiring, most commonly exploding. Or uncommonly, it could have interesting side effects none could have predicted. So imagine what blasting an evil moon goddess with the mother of all rainbows could result in.
Anon is tired of the hectic day-to-day of living amongst the ponyfolk and decides to purchase some land in the Everfree to have some peace and quiet all by his lonesome. How much land you ask? All of it
When I woke up in a forest one day I thought I was dreaming but its turning out to be a really strange nightmare. Talking ponies, massive creatures from hell, and a real bitchy gryphon... They better have therapy sessions here...
Here goes! Its been five years since I've written my last story. Whew! Well all comments are appreciated especially constructive criticism. I hope you all enjoy what I can dish out. Peace!
148168 Thank you and thank you! Im not quite sure how I didnt catch that paragaph duplicate but thank you for letting me know. Sorry it took me a day to get around to it.
This one and The Lost Equestria are easily one of the best HiE fanfics over here... and most underrated too . Hopefully, you wont die like the author of TLE did (I really think he died lol), anyway.... I really like where this is going so.... can I have moar pls??
160595 I won't die on ya man and I started this story because of an awesome dream and since I started it so hear me now I.WILL.FINISH.IT. It feels so awesome not having to hold this story in my head to fade with memory with time and at the same time allow the world to see what went on inside my head for three months now. The next chapter was also really fun and I think you'll like it.
One typo.."If it means anything my friend Sweetie Belle said something about seeing a gryphon earlier today on her farm." You meant Apple Bloom, I'm sure.
537508 Can't honestly say Videogames Friends More videogames And freerunning I have very little time for the story at the current moment but I'll try to keep my blog updated. But rest assured I have one hell of a plot that may or may not span into multiple stories and projects.
Sir' im a friend of ponyninja (Killerninja). i was there when you sent the message. i say you should continue this story, its really interesting. You really should continue this.
Here goes! Its been five years since I've written my last story. Whew! Well all comments are appreciated especially constructive criticism. I hope you all enjoy what I can dish out. Peace!
Lets see where this goes shall we hmmm?
fantastic
Yeaaaah I was going to post chapter six last night but let me tell you my friend sleep is one hell of a drug...
this has potential.
The first and the second paragraph are copied,
anyway this is a great story, 5 stars
Excellent
148168
Thank you and thank you!
Im not quite sure how I didnt catch that paragaph duplicate but thank you for letting me know. Sorry it took me a day to get around to it.
This one and The Lost Equestria are easily one of the best HiE fanfics over here... and most underrated too . Hopefully, you wont die like the author of TLE did (I really think he died lol), anyway.... I really like where this is going so.... can I have moar pls??
160595
I won't die on ya man and I started this story because of an awesome dream and since I started it so hear me now I.WILL.FINISH.IT. It feels so awesome not having to hold this story in my head to fade with memory with time and at the same time allow the world to see what went on inside my head for three months now. The next chapter was also really fun and I think you'll like it.
Ah hell EVERYONE wants a piece dont they?
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
MMMOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAARRRR
also, great chapter
162053
Then more you shall have!... Soon
What, may I ask, is goin dah fuq on?
Interesting...
Still... interesting. I lold
Again. Da fuq? I shall continue reading.
Just to let everyone know I'm not dead... Just Mass Effected
uuuummmm........... confusing? but good
I APPROVE
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Wow, this story is awesome I hope it isn't dead
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Working on it
Got some free time today
uumm could you get that officer back. I was assoulted with a wall of text
'Whats your game troll?'
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ok i make it official. I shall comment on each chapter! NO ARGUING
AHHHHH BLOODY HELL! I FORGOT TO COMMENT ON THE LAST CHAPTER. any way I must leave and wait for next chapter FOR SCOTLAND!
I have the rough draft of chapter nine posted but I'm not publishing until I run this through a spell check.
Fav'd
FURST
Dun, dun, dunnnnnnnn..... And the plot thickens to the point of oatmeal....
One typo.."If it means anything my friend Sweetie Belle said something about seeing a gryphon earlier today on her farm."
You meant Apple Bloom, I'm sure.
Also bad pun time.... Red Bull gives you Wings!
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Thanks!
Fix'd
414088
Officer?
You mean the one at the beginning?
Finally the wait is over!
nice chapter btw
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> when are you gonna add njavascript:void(0);ext one?
Add a whatnow?
537508
Can't honestly say
Videogames
Friends
More videogames
And freerunning
I have very little time for the story at the current moment but I'll try to keep my blog updated.
But rest assured I have one hell of a plot that may or may not span into multiple stories and projects.
cant wait for the next chapter
Sir' im a friend of ponyninja (Killerninja). i was there when you sent the message. i say you should continue this story, its really interesting. You really should continue this.
I doubt that there will be any new chapters to this story... Still favorited, hoping for a miracle.
Well this is dead sad