• Member Since 7th Jul, 2012
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gordobraveheart


brony, rapper thats it

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well ill read later hope its good

I'm intrigued... not the best of introductions, but based on the ending I'm willing to read more.

Seems great, gonna definately keep an eye on this. Only thing I should point out is that 'mourning' is what you do when you're at someone's funeral, to honour the dead. The time of day is spelt 'morning'. Apart from that, faved and watching. :twilightsmile:

I like where this is going. Please go on!

Ooh can't wait what happens next.:pinkiehappy:

How does a story have Sex as a tag, yet stay teen? Also, can your description's grammar and spelling be any worse?

1884060 Last I checked, knighty said those need to be tagged mature as well. Lyra and Bon Bon's Odd Jobs had to be changed due to the sexual references long before it got into any true sexuality, after all.

Really?:rainbowhuh: I honestly had no idea :twilightblush: I'll change it now.:twilightsmile:

Someponys gone get raped.

And I make up a new face-thing someone make a picture for it please perhaps a gif,
The face-re-entry crater!

You could really do with an editor, or at least giving things a readthrough before you post them, this is a funny little fic, but it's littered with typos :pinkiesad2:

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Is it Molestia or Celestia?

Hence, confus.

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That's what I don't like. I hate Molestia.

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Shitty link directs me to FJ homepage.

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Shows me teeny tiny icon.

Keep going I'm loving this story so far!

Guard your ass she is comi........ Om........ Da.... Get of........ Me you sycotic bitch...... :trollestia: done

Yes. This was AWSOME and HILARIOUS.

Keep it up. :trollestia:

funny, now, when will he get molested?

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For all we know, he could have been molested in his sleep already.

Conscience = the mind
conscious = awake

Either way, brilliant :pinkiehappy:

1958286Thanks for the help, bro.:twilightsmile: Mind telling me what you like about this story so far?:pinkiehappy:

1982900 The pervy princesses are pretty cool, and your character interaction is solid. I'm not a big fan of 'character having a discussion with brain' but hey, that doesn't much.

..... hu... I've been recognized for something... this new :derpyderp1: and as always your welcome :twilightsmile:

You're welcome and good luck for future writing. :rainbowkiss:

No, thank YOU for the story :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for this pure hilarity that my eyes have read.

I was all "lets read dem names"

I looked down and when I FINNALY saw my name I was all

"YESS I got recognized for somthing other than editing!" :eeyup:

1987446Of course you get recognize, Cirrus!:pinkiehappy: Also, in case anybody is reading this comment, new chapter will be updated tomorrow!

By the way, I like dat Octavia pic.

Yeah, getting recognized as somthing other than an editor is new...
:trixieshiftleft: I like...

And Thanks! I drew Octi freehand with inspiration off of someone's deviantArt page :twilightblush:
She took literally 4months to complete... :moustache: worth it.

1987472YI know how you feel about getting recognized :ajsleepy: I'm currently still trying to figure out how to record a rap song and upload it on youtube!

Also....YOU DREW OCTAVIA!?!? HUH!??!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

Yes, I did draw Octavia Van Cleff.

It took INFINATELY More time than you'd think it would. I had to re-try her head 5-6 times, and the colors I did in photoshop :rainbowderp: I still have the original pencil and marker drawing too. It's a huge achievement for me. And before you ask me to do cover art...

If it Dosn't come to me, and if I don't have reference I draw mediocre at best. :twilightoops:

1987508Nah, it's fine, you don't need to make some cover art.:pinkiesmile::scootangel:


My O.C though,:pinkiecrazy:

Just kidding.:rainbowlaugh:

Yeah, as I said.

Mediocre except for moments of long painful labor to brilliance. :twilightsmile:

But yeah, can't wait for the update!! :trollestia:

1987661I'll tell you what, there are a few references in the story:scootangel:

Ahahahhhhahhaahha!!

Yes can't wait!

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