When a blue box containing a mysterious pony lands in Ditzy's yard, she calls for the Elements. But the more she speaks with this "Doctor," the more convinced she is that they've met already.
This is not how Poison joke works! Poison Joke simply causes a minor mishap with a pony's special talent. Perhaps it's a special brand of Poison Joke, engineered by diabolical scientists out for revenge against the ponies, or something, but regular Poison Joke doesn't do this. Maybe you should add a side chapter explaining how Poison Joke had this effect?
6048 Well, when i had the idea for the fic i thought "And the poison jokes will do it because of the of the HUGE AMOUT of flowers" At least in my head, the enormous amount of poison joke would create a non-linear fenomenum in large proportions.
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That's all I have to say.
What is this I don't even.....
what.
I like these comments XD
wat
I think the story is moving a little bit too fast.
You need to slow it down a bit. A chapter shouldn't contain two whole days.
This is madness.
Uhhhh.
Why was this even accepted?
Uhhhhhhhhh... all I have to say is, That is all :|
"I knew I shouldn't have eaten so many of those 'special' brownies Pinkie Pie made!" Twilight admonished herself angrily.
I actually rather enjoy insane crap like this. Please continue.
wut
i know you're just giving it a go but you can't write for shit. sry
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I'm really really sorry I have to say it, but they guy above me, he has a point...
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Give him a little credit for trying... it's not that bad
4085 thank you!
When will the next come out
4152 it will be soon
need moar it is hilarious especially pinkie i am like her biggest fan
This is not how Poison joke works! Poison Joke simply causes a minor mishap with a pony's special talent. Perhaps it's a special brand of Poison Joke, engineered by diabolical scientists out for revenge against the ponies, or something, but regular Poison Joke doesn't do this. Maybe you should add a side chapter explaining how Poison Joke had this effect?
6048 Well, when i had the idea for the fic i thought "And the poison jokes will do it because of the of the HUGE AMOUT of flowers" At least in my head, the enormous amount of poison joke would create a non-linear fenomenum in large proportions.
"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS CUTIE MARK-PONY MEDIATORS! YAY!"
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
3716 Madness? THIS!!! IS!!! FIMFIC!!!!
But... I-if... if you think it's madness, I- I guess you can... if you want too...
7540 you mean phenomenon. Just pointing out a mistake you can edit.
130322
The mistakes make it approximately 1/5th cooler