DISCLAIMER!
This story is based on the video by LadyKyra7, and the pictures on Deviantart.com
Original video, is below... Please read the Arthur's notes before reading the chapters,
Thank you,
-Flameriver,
This fanfiction is about the war against the Solar Empire and the New Lunar Republic, Celistia vs. Nightmare Moon,
Nightmare Moon is magically brought to live by a star constellation sequence and a spell by a unknown mare, and she brings as much creatures who has a grudge against Ponyville and its citizens, and they formed a alliance and soon a republic to try and overthrow Celistia and Luna however, they are NOT going down with out a fight!
Back in the Peaceful for one year, Twilight enjoys her friends, visting to Shining Armor on occasions, all is normal. But that all changes when Pinkie Pie's seventh sense started predicting, a unplanned by the Pegasus, a thunderstorm to take place. Also a fire that burns down the Everfree forest and Fluttershy's home by the Luna Republic ignites the menace war.
And a death of a beloved Hero......
WHO COULD IT BE? Find out in My Little Pony: This. Means. War!
And a scene from the Background Ponies!
Also, I am taking adutions for OC characters! about 7 will make it! get your OC Pony/Pegasus/Unicorn in the Story!
About that video, here it is so I do not get sued!
Again, this is for entertainment ONLY!
[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-JrLRawqcbA]
And I was to pick a Theme song it would be Safe and Sound by Taylor Swift because this reminds me of the Hunger games a little, and it sounds like Apple Jack is singing! xD
Please read the Arthur notes
Well, if you insist...
Nah, That's only important stuff, You can do what y'all want,
Actually, It's important stuff like if you want to PM me something important and Copyright shit,
Please enjoy yourself!
My friend, you're on a FAN-FICTION website. Hasbro, nor anyone else monitors this site like a rune prison, and I would be rather disappointed if you DID own MLP.
Title:
*This. Is. War!
(I'm assuming since this is how you spelled it in the description.)
Description:
*author's
*Celestia
*visiting
*auditions
Prologue:
*putrid
They just got what? Did they get wrapping paper? Are they making gifts?
Is this some kind of title? If not, tornadoes should not be capitalized.
*favors
*army
*republic
*alliance
*you
*Equestria
Chapter 1:
colon, not a comma.
*were
Sentence fragment; It should be:
RAINBOW DASH
excessive repetition of 'eating'
Not actually a word in the English language, but if you want to be nit-picky, everyone else spells it as "Eeyup"
again, colon; not a comma.
Semicolons in place of the commas.
"Oh hey Twilight; Spike."
O.o
*push (???)
Let me fix this for you:
PLEASE stop ending every single paragraph (and most sentences) in a comma; This isn't poetry.
This is Singed's diagnosis
Stay shaken, not stirred.
Thank you,
As I said on my other story, DON'T SUGAR COAT MY STORY! I want the cold realization.
And I have a habit of typing a little too fast and I will have to proof read before I publish another chapter. So I need to slow down and take my time like you said huh? As I said about m typing, I actually look on the screen(NOT on the Keyboard) and a few things I actually meant to get wrong! Just to see if you were actually paying attention.
I Shall correct these errors right away and you let me know if anything else is wrong?
'Kay? OKAY!
-Flameriver
Also, Please rate fairly.
I don't accept Arsekissers, nor do I accept haters,
I HATE IT WHEN I GO ON ANYWEBSITE AND PEOPLE SUGAR-COAT MY STORIES!
I ask you to give me an honest response and be fair, even though I ask for the cold truth, I don't want people to grab my throat about EVERY. SINGLE. MISTAKE!
hmm needs some work in the department of grammer but not half bad
Yes, yes, *Smokes a bubble pipe*
I needn't to say that my grammar isn't my fatal flaw, I also type to fast as well....
was listening to the video while faffing around fimfiction
then i see this fanfic based on what im currently listening
then thought "interesting curve ball"
It is a curve ball and quite a coincidence,
Also has my little twist with Doctor Whooves
Really Stupid of me... but I locked myself out of my own damn account, I CAN'T BELIEVE I FORGOT MY PASSWORD!
Really, this is my Second account! I swear to what ever is Holy!
-Flameriver
Soon avalable in FANFICTION.COM