This is my first story ever and I am also a terrible writer. So I decided, why not. This idea has been bugging me for the past month, so here goes.
A man gets transported to Equestria by unkown means as he tries to figure out what happened. After saving a foals life, will he be a hero to the locals, or will past events catch up to him before he can prove them wrong?
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Yeah, I'm pretty sure I've seen plenty of HiE fics like this before.
On top of that, your formatting is atrocious.
Nice try buddy boy
Been there, done that.
Wouldn't it be somewhat more interesting if you came up with a good explanation of how he ended up there? I don't want to be mean, however this "randomly teleported to Equestria" thing is almost as old as "Woke up in the Everfree forest, turned into alicorn (Red-maned, BLACK alicorn!!!) Arrgh.
Very promising, just as it ended i felt some panic for the guy.
good keep going.....please?
just like i said this is litterally my first time ever writing so ease it up a little bit with the insults. thanks
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one, i dont have a an editor and i had no help whatsoever in writing this. if you want to help me feel free to do so
ok so i have updated it because apparently when i put it on here first, FIMfiction screwed it all up and i had to redo the spacing and such
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your right about that but the charatcers dont have too much dialogue until next chapter. It should be better when I start it.
Seems to b good. Plz keep going