• Member Since 6th Nov, 2011
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Thorax


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Part of the Equestria's Crazies Universe

It's Nightmare Moon's first Nightmare Night how will she handle a holiday dedicated to her?
How will Luna keep her in line? Are they even going to have a chance to enjoy this Night?

But really we all know what the real question is: Who is Keyser Söze

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Comments ( 41 )

I really like this. It was cute and funny. Good job.

keysersoze is an cheat code in Warcraft III for gold...

lol. Pip you TRAITOR

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It amused me far longer then it should have

O LOL! Pip, the master spy/assassin. Paid in candy.

"Rubber Ducky you're the one who makes bathtime loads of fun!"

..Dat referance

278765

Out of all the Mentally abridged episodes I have never abused something that much

Any time someone starts telling me something I don't want to hear I just start yelling at the top of my lungs

oh how i love this website, so many great stories lol i've read more here over the past few months then i have played videogames... usually its almost all gaming for me but i have no complaints whatsoever :pinkiehappy:

Ok good, im not the only one who thinks of manticores as a viable solution to most problems.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAUAUAUAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAUAUUAUAUAUAUAUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

Ahaha, Pip is a double agent. :trollestia:

279050 my pre-exploded I did my best

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Those were my only gripes. One time was understandable, but the repeated use made me realize you didn't know how to use "then" and "than".

279787
That I do not.

280190 "Then" is used for time, or a sequence of events. "Than" is used for comparative purposes, or to compare things.

So Pip is a double agent......:trixieshiftleft:

280231

Thank you my kind sir

So as in

So tomorrow I'll edit everything then it'll be all good.

280326 Yes, yes, soon you shall be inducted by his Holy Fuhrer-ness.
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280458

Oh god no, what have I become?!

Cute, very cute. Though, you may wish to have someone proofread and/or edit your work.

281962

I do have a very talented editor however he seems to have dropped off the face of the earth.
I'm hoping it's nothing serious and that he'll be back soon.

What is the words I'm looking for? Oh yeah...This is hilariously E-P-I-C!:rainbowdetermined2::rainbowlaugh:. You my friend need to continue with the epicness that is this or better yet the awesomeness (I don't know your choice:rainbowlaugh:). Double agent Pipsqueak, with a revenging trio of alicorns? HELL. TO. DA. YEAH! Got it? I WILL read this until the end NO matter WHAT. See you on the next chapter:twilightsmile:. Also don't worry about the spell checking stuff too much. There wasn't anything that was outrageous or something like that:twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh:.

well i see you have qieut the following may i ask you for HELPFUl advice rather then somthing about "troll fic and shit?":fluttercry: thank you i really do need help:pinkiesad2:

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I'm am truly sorry if your story isn't a trollfic, This site tends to get so many that I just begin to assume which are trolls and which are just a first attempt.
I'll leave some comments on your page in a few seconds.

416985 I left you a few tips on your page if you need anything else just ask :D

You give Celly the moon, you get sent to the moon! :trollestia:


I.
Could.
Not.
Resist.

My stomach hurts from the lolz

I was laughing so hard I couldn't breathe and almost passed out

Squidward's house?

That bastard.

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Is there really a Squidwards house joke in there?
My god I need to read this right now.

Pip is simply diabolical.

"I am Woona moon explorer extraordinaire" She said striking a hard-boiled pose.
Best story ever.

Also Celestia is kiiiiiiiind of a bitch :trollestia:
And needs to come up with a new punishment, I mean how many times can you really send someone to the moon?

LOL! Oh Pip! You trater!

Pip you double faced traitor

6780241 Uh, he was dressed as a NINJA... ring ring Hello, Clue Phone.

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